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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
Battle Record: 35-45
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They call me Mandingo when I sling the D to broads
Your girl's a slut, every time u fuck u feel like Diddy at the Bet awards But when she's with me I turn your girl into a geyser Everything u say is horse shit, they only let u in the Farm cuz they needed fertilizer And I'll rob u just for kicks, doesn't matter whether my pockets'll fatten I got that 12 gauge, one blast and you'll be everywhere at once like Dr. Manhattan ^^^^ This section was dope, I really enjoyed that JPP bar too that Joe Metts line was pretty funny too, dope shit all around the only bar I didn't really get was the Bags line, but this was a tight verse regardless Your wifey ain't faithful we fuck a lotta nights, boo's face gets creamed Ya whole bed a mess... & nigga you can switch those covers out yourself like 2K16 1 minute u coulda been loc, next u was almost piru... stop pretendin for street props How u got blue on the left AND red on the right but ain't wearin Kendrick's new reeboks If u ain't grippin them things I'm comin thru & clippin ur wings This grave I'm diggin is reeeealll spacious kid, it's fit for a King ^^^^^^ this section was dope on the opposite end, but the rest seemed filler ish I couldn't fuck with that AXE line, and that opening line felt kind of cheesy but other then that you had that contender match line which worked for you I felt had you worded some of your lines properly it would have came off smoother but I felt like you slipped far too much in the beginning...either way nice work v/Karaoke, He came with an all around stinging verse, a few misfires but the whole flow of the piece was so slick, it didn't effect it too much as for the contender, I felt like his opener seemed off & didn't work well the NYSE thing kind of backfired, the concept was cool, but the wording didn't work Karaoke just had more lines that hit as opposed to the other guy... nice battle though...
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