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Pretty similar approaches, which actually makes this a lot easier to judge.
Hush, I liked this line. the American dream turns to a nightmare off ambien That was real slick, as far as Destroyer: I really enjoyed the whole piece. The rhyme scheme was pretty dope through out the whole piece, and these bars in bold stood out to me. I don't think they were brilliant ideas or anything, but they were somewhat clever, enough to put a smirk on my face. "my status update is that 'it's fucked.' great. i tweeted it, just to repeat it. and, in my interest, it got pinned to pinterest. but then i got pissed and deleted it. out of boredom, i posted it on another forum. with an edit, and it made it to reddit! all the way to the front page, but then, in my blunt rage, i sincerely started to regret it. cuz what i thought was a riddle... putting 'not' in the middle was really a lie and a little pathetic." vDestroyer |
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