UnbornBuddha vs Razah (UnbornBuddha wins)

Woke · 07-11-2015, 01:15 AM

Razah - That shit was just dope. Concise and crisp with a fine edge, direct and to the point.

Buddha - Ending was slick, the 'cog in machine' reference tied the story together some what. The problem is you were kind of all over the place. i believe you ran into this problem against Devoid of Orbit when had his short and sweet verses about them bed bugs that was a classic. The long wind you blow is often layered and just a joy to digest. But when you face the abbreviated version of your talent level, well, I don't know how to say it nice really, you make them look better?? Tough to explain, but I think you get it. Sometimes you should read the opponent and write a massive scuplture, then slowly whittle it down to microcosom, selecting your favorite few parts and expanding loosely. I will say I see you wrote from the perspective of a cotton field, dope concept and dope verse. But in all honesty I think you ran into a work of art this week.

Razah

07-11-2015, 01:15 AM	#1
Woke Senior Member Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 183 Battle Record: 6-4 Rep Power: 553418	Razah - That shit was just dope. Concise and crisp with a fine edge, direct and to the point. Buddha - Ending was slick, the 'cog in machine' reference tied the story together some what. The problem is you were kind of all over the place. i believe you ran into this problem against Devoid of Orbit when had his short and sweet verses about them bed bugs that was a classic. The long wind you blow is often layered and just a joy to digest. But when you face the abbreviated version of your talent level, well, I don't know how to say it nice really, you make them look better?? Tough to explain, but I think you get it. Sometimes you should read the opponent and write a massive scuplture, then slowly whittle it down to microcosom, selecting your favorite few parts and expanding loosely. I will say I see you wrote from the perspective of a cotton field, dope concept and dope verse. But in all honesty I think you ran into a work of art this week. Razah