Wanderer 4-6 Vs Dre 1-2 - DRE WINS

Allen Knight · 07-06-2015, 03:21 PM

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Verses are due Thursday, July 9th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
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First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Wanderer @Dre

Wanderer · 07-08-2015, 01:24 PM

Mad distracted with work lately..

10.

Claiming a Crooked lifestyle. Stand up Straight against me, it'll cost ya
when I'm done you'll be slumped in a chair... & that'll have nothin to do with bad posture
If there's "your favourite rapper" themed parties I'll be willing to bet wages
nobody ever goes Astray cos his bars been off the beaten track for ages
You suck Dre & it's clear you've never charmed the birds
unless it's other peoples writtens stolen you've never got Away with words
I'm at my pinnacle with women & I can show yours what she's missin'
only time you've ever Peaked was at a urinal with other men pissin
Wanna take a big dog like me? It'll come back to haunt you every time
dude for you this'll have totally Back Fired when I empty a clip into your spine

Amen. · 07-08-2015, 02:26 PM

Wins: Chyeah, Defiant (by N/S), Razah (by N/S), Unfukwitable (by N/S)
Losses: Lotto Smirk, Junto, Destroyer, Cred

Man… Listen,

You WACK! & all ya wins were N/S, it’s obv ya’ weak of course,
Ironic; You rocked Chin & ery'one that showed shattered this geeks w/ force.
That’s fucked dude, it only means that you can’t fight or spar,
Ya’ verses are quite The Strain – So Fuck the season @Hush & write his bars.
My fists, Bruce Lee status. You don’t wan’ shoot the 5 w/ em ock,
Cross these hands… & yours will end up across your chest… inside of a box.
See, I’m PR… My kinds fly & it’s facts kids fear to get trampled,
If we look into ya’ culture,
A Hazmat suite & Doctor’s needed to handle the bacteria sample.
I’m savage kid, I’m talkin havoc shit taken lives, my set is poppin,
Can’t front, ya cans are used on a daily too… Bum needs the 5 cent deposit.

10, ez.

Bust · 07-08-2015, 04:36 PM

Wanderer

Opener was cool written a stolen was ok n closer was ok

Dre

Opener went over my head, who's chin? Quite the strain was cool inside a box was lotb, bacteria sample was cool n closer was ok

If wanderer executed a couple bars cleaner this would be tuff but I feel dre had a harsher more consistent verse including lotb. Enjoyable read n gl but I gotta go with dre here

Dre

Mr. J · 07-08-2015, 09:32 PM

Claiming a Crooked lifestyle. Stand up Straight against me, it'll cost ya
when I'm done you'll be slumped in a chair... & that'll have nothin to do with bad posture
If there's "your favourite rapper" themed parties I'll be willing to bet wages
nobody ever goes Astray cos his bars been off the beaten track for ages
^^^
this section was pretty cool, that 'away with words' kind of killed your steam for me
I don't really enjoy the use of 'a way with words' that's just a no no from the jump for me
but you picked it back up with that urinal line which I thought was funny...smooth work

That’s fucked dude, it only means that you can’t fight or spar,
Ya’ verses are quite The Strain – So Fuck the season @Hush & write his bars.
My fists, Bruce Lee status. You don’t wan’ shoot the 5 w/ em ock,
Cross these hands… & yours will end up across your chest… inside of a box.
^^^
that little section was pretty slick, I enjoyed that the most as I read
that opener kind of went over my head as well, and the hazmat was ehh
alright...but that closer was enough to edge this out in your favor...

v/Dre, I felt he came with some better punches, even though a few were kinda eh
but Wanderer could have had this had he not used the 'a way with words' line
I felt like this was evenly matched as far as different styles go, pretty slick shit from both though
that hands folded line is what did it for me though...

Bash · 07-09-2015, 11:18 AM

Astray (kinda)

Vs

Strain, inside the box

V/Dre. His verses hit way harder. I don't think Wand put asich effort in as he did last week.

Ace · 07-10-2015, 02:03 PM

slumped in a chair was gully.. and peaked was funny.. away and backfired hurt the verse tho.. on the other end.. strain and closer were coo.. that culture line was crazy.. this was close but i think dre just edged it

v Dre

Tic · 07-10-2015, 03:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wanderer

Mad distracted with work lately..

10.

Claiming a Crooked lifestyle. Stand up Straight against me, it'll cost ya
when I'm done you'll be slumped in a chair... & that'll have nothin to do with bad posture
Not bad.
If there's "your favourite rapper" themed parties I'll be willing to bet wages
nobody ever goes Astray cos his bars been off the beaten track for ages
Ehh.
You suck Dre & it's clear you've never charmed the birds
unless it's other peoples writtens stolen you've never got Away with words
I haven't seen proof of this & the wording seemed off.
I'm at my pinnacle with women & I can show yours what she's missin'
only time you've ever Peaked was at a urinal with other men pissin
This is actually funnyl.
Wanna take a big dog like me? It'll come back to haunt you every time
dude for you this'll have totally Back Fired when I empty a clip into your spine
Not feeling this.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dre

Wins: Chyeah, Defiant (by N/S), Razah (by N/S), Unfukwitable (by N/S)
Losses: Lotto Smirk, Junto, Destroyer, Cred

Man… Listen,

You WACK! & all ya wins were N/S, it’s obv ya’ weak of course,
Ironic; You rocked Chin & ery'one that showed shattered this geeks w/ force.
This is decent.
That’s fucked dude, it only means that you can’t fight or spar,
Ya’ verses are quite The Strain – So Fuck the season @Hush & write his bars.
Pretty good.
My fists, Bruce Lee status. You don’t wan’ shoot the 5 w/ em ock,
Cross these hands… & yours will end up across your chest… inside of a box.
This is fire.
See, I’m PR… My kinds fly & it’s facts kids fear to get trampled,
If we look into ya’ culture,
A Hazmat suite & Doctor’s needed to handle the bacteria sample.
Decent.
I’m savage kid, I’m talkin havoc shit taken lives, my set is poppin,
Can’t front, ya cans are used on a daily too… Bum needs the 5 cent deposit.
This is ok.
10, ez.

Dre gets this on consistency and LOTB. Wanderer came with a pretty decent verse with a couple bars that were worded a bit awkward with meh concepts. Even if all else was equal, that Crossed Hands bar from Dre was fire.

Ronin · 07-10-2015, 04:18 PM

Could tell wanderers shit was mad rushed. He had half assed wording on pretty common concepts with no real flip to make it seem like anything fresh. That astray line was ok, if u say it u can hear as dre so that's aite. Peak at urinals was pretty funny.

Dre I assume chin is chyeeaaa, this was OK but i didnt like the wording in the execution, looks like u just adding words in there for filler to make the bar longer n it drags it out. Second line is blah, what r u implying that hush ghosts for him? Ak did a strain personal on hush already that was dope. This seems like ur involving hush in ur verse for no reason whatsoever other to mention him cause ur an attention seeking fgt trying way to hard to be one of the cool kids. But I digress, fgt. Third line, cool. Fourth, cool. Closer, no, can lines are sooooo last week.

This is actually close but I gotta give it to dre. Wanderer just didn't have enough.

V/ dre

Junto · 07-11-2015, 05:05 PM

Claiming a Crooked lifestyle. Stand up Straight against me, it'll cost ya
when I'm done you'll be slumped in a chair... & that'll have nothin to do with bad posture
a little too simple
If there's "your favourite rapper" themed parties I'll be willing to bet wages
nobody ever goes Astray cos his bars been off the beaten track for ages
off the beaten track, I see you... Astray doesn't sound anything like that to me tho
You suck Dre & it's clear you've never charmed the birds
unless it's other peoples writtens stolen you've never got Away with words
wasn't feelin this
I'm at my pinnacle with women & I can show yours what she's missin'
only time you've ever Peaked was at a urinal with other men pissin
not real complex but kinda funny
Wanna take a big dog like me? It'll come back to haunt you every time
dude for you this'll have totally Back Fired when I empty a clip into your spine
nah

vs.

You WACK! & all ya wins were N/S, it’s obv ya’ weak of course,
Ironic; You rocked Chin & ery'one that showed shattered this geeks w/ force.
cool, decent tie in
That’s fucked dude, it only means that you can’t fight or spar,
Ya’ verses are quite The Strain – So Fuck the season @Hush & write his bars.
ehhh
My fists, Bruce Lee status. You don’t wan’ shoot the 5 w/ em ock,
Cross these hands… & yours will end up across your chest… inside of a box.
this is tough.
See, I’m PR… My kinds fly & it’s facts kids fear to get trampled,
If we look into ya’ culture,
A Hazmat suite & Doctor’s needed to handle the bacteria sample.
solid
I’m savage kid, I’m talkin havoc shit taken lives, my set is poppin,
Can’t front, ya cans are used on a daily too… Bum needs the 5 cent deposit.
ok

Dre got this one... Cross the hands was heat, LOTB.
Culture was a nice idea and the opener wasn't bad either.
Wand had some humor wit peak but not a lot else I liked this week.

V/ Dre

ribbit · 07-12-2015, 08:00 AM

Okay lol I'm going to go the opposite way on this and giv e my vote to wander becuz I enjoyed his verse better thought dre came too simple and a lot of his lines weren't coherent what with all the grammer and punctuation that he used in his verse..anyways I enjoyed some of wanders verse and even though I didn't think it was the best I've read from him I still think he had just enough to take the win...yeah so...

Vote///wanderer

07-06-2015, 03:21 PM	#1
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	Wanderer 4-6 Vs Dre 1-2 - DRE WINS Netcees Battle League Season VIII Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday, July 9th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes @Wanderer @Dre __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys.

07-08-2015, 09:32 PM	#5
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Claiming a Crooked lifestyle. Stand up Straight against me, it'll cost ya when I'm done you'll be slumped in a chair... & that'll have nothin to do with bad posture If there's "your favourite rapper" themed parties I'll be willing to bet wages nobody ever goes Astray cos his bars been off the beaten track for ages ^^^ this section was pretty cool, that 'away with words' kind of killed your steam for me I don't really enjoy the use of 'a way with words' that's just a no no from the jump for me but you picked it back up with that urinal line which I thought was funny...smooth work That’s fucked dude, it only means that you can’t fight or spar, Ya’ verses are quite The Strain – So Fuck the season @Hush & write his bars. My fists, Bruce Lee status. You don’t wan’ shoot the 5 w/ em ock, Cross these hands… & yours will end up across your chest… inside of a box. ^^^ that little section was pretty slick, I enjoyed that the most as I read that opener kind of went over my head as well, and the hazmat was ehh alright...but that closer was enough to edge this out in your favor... v/Dre, I felt he came with some better punches, even though a few were kinda eh but Wanderer could have had this had he not used the 'a way with words' line I felt like this was evenly matched as far as different styles go, pretty slick shit from both though that hands folded line is what did it for me though... __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

07-10-2015, 04:18 PM	#9
Ronin #MAGA Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 603 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 8417277	Could tell wanderers shit was mad rushed. He had half assed wording on pretty common concepts with no real flip to make it seem like anything fresh. That astray line was ok, if u say it u can hear as dre so that's aite. Peak at urinals was pretty funny. Dre I assume chin is chyeeaaa, this was OK but i didnt like the wording in the execution, looks like u just adding words in there for filler to make the bar longer n it drags it out. Second line is blah, what r u implying that hush ghosts for him? Ak did a strain personal on hush already that was dope. This seems like ur involving hush in ur verse for no reason whatsoever other to mention him cause ur an attention seeking fgt trying way to hard to be one of the cool kids. But I digress, fgt. Third line, cool. Fourth, cool. Closer, no, can lines are sooooo last week. This is actually close but I gotta give it to dre. Wanderer just didn't have enough. V/ dre __________________ Too smooth for u dudes

07-12-2015, 08:00 AM	#11
ribbit The deputy of nc Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: The Rodent Kingdom Posts: 514 Battle Record: 1-10 Rep Power: 7784053	Okay lol I'm going to go the opposite way on this and giv e my vote to wander becuz I enjoyed his verse better thought dre came too simple and a lot of his lines weren't coherent what with all the grammer and punctuation that he used in his verse..anyways I enjoyed some of wanders verse and even though I didn't think it was the best I've read from him I still think he had just enough to take the win...yeah so... Vote///wanderer __________________ Get lost

07-08-2015, 01:24 PM	#2
Wanderer Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: England Posts: 589 Battle Record: 24-33 Champed - NPL Roast Rep Power: 7457541	Mad distracted with work lately.. 10. Claiming a Crooked lifestyle. Stand up Straight against me, it'll cost ya when I'm done you'll be slumped in a chair... & that'll have nothin to do with bad posture If there's "your favourite rapper" themed parties I'll be willing to bet wages nobody ever goes Astray cos his bars been off the beaten track for ages You suck Dre & it's clear you've never charmed the birds unless it's other peoples writtens stolen you've never got Away with words I'm at my pinnacle with women & I can show yours what she's missin' only time you've ever Peaked was at a urinal with other men pissin Wanna take a big dog like me? It'll come back to haunt you every time dude for you this'll have totally Back Fired when I empty a clip into your spine

07-08-2015, 02:26 PM	#3
Amen. Banned Join Date: Jun 2015 Location: New York Posts: 2,047 Battle Record: 16-9 Rep Power: 0	Wins: Chyeah, Defiant (by N/S), Razah (by N/S), Unfukwitable (by N/S) Losses: Lotto Smirk, Junto, Destroyer, Cred Man… Listen, You WACK! & all ya wins were N/S, it’s obv ya’ weak of course, Ironic; You rocked Chin & ery'one that showed shattered this geeks w/ force. That’s fucked dude, it only means that you can’t fight or spar, Ya’ verses are quite The Strain – So Fuck the season @Hush & write his bars. My fists, Bruce Lee status. You don’t wan’ shoot the 5 w/ em ock, Cross these hands… & yours will end up across your chest… inside of a box. See, I’m PR… My kinds fly & it’s facts kids fear to get trampled, If we look into ya’ culture, A Hazmat suite & Doctor’s needed to handle the bacteria sample. I’m savage kid, I’m talkin havoc shit taken lives, my set is poppin, Can’t front, ya cans are used on a daily too… Bum needs the 5 cent deposit. 10, ez.

07-08-2015, 04:36 PM	#4
Bust Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 164 Battle Record: 5-7 Rep Power: 3710883	Wanderer Opener was cool written a stolen was ok n closer was ok Dre Opener went over my head, who's chin? Quite the strain was cool inside a box was lotb, bacteria sample was cool n closer was ok If wanderer executed a couple bars cleaner this would be tuff but I feel dre had a harsher more consistent verse including lotb. Enjoyable read n gl but I gotta go with dre here Dre

07-09-2015, 11:18 AM	#6
Bash Barrin' Out Join Date: Nov 2014 Posts: 577 Battle Record: 16-15 Champed - Fight Night 5 Rep Power: 13649171	Astray (kinda) Vs Strain, inside the box V/Dre. His verses hit way harder. I don't think Wand put asich effort in as he did last week.

07-10-2015, 02:03 PM	#7
Ace The Bad Guy Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 115 Battle Record: 2-1 Rep Power: 8304536	slumped in a chair was gully.. and peaked was funny.. away and backfired hurt the verse tho.. on the other end.. strain and closer were coo.. that culture line was crazy.. this was close but i think dre just edged it v Dre

07-11-2015, 05:05 PM	#10
Junto The Founder Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 827 Battle Record: 30-11 Accomplishments - Shadow Pic Roast Champed - Key Grand Prix 3 - NBL Season 8 Rep Power: 11766208	Claiming a Crooked lifestyle. Stand up Straight against me, it'll cost ya when I'm done you'll be slumped in a chair... & that'll have nothin to do with bad posture a little too simple If there's "your favourite rapper" themed parties I'll be willing to bet wages nobody ever goes Astray cos his bars been off the beaten track for ages off the beaten track, I see you... Astray doesn't sound anything like that to me tho You suck Dre & it's clear you've never charmed the birds unless it's other peoples writtens stolen you've never got Away with words wasn't feelin this I'm at my pinnacle with women & I can show yours what she's missin' only time you've ever Peaked was at a urinal with other men pissin not real complex but kinda funny Wanna take a big dog like me? It'll come back to haunt you every time dude for you this'll have totally Back Fired when I empty a clip into your spine nah vs. You WACK! & all ya wins were N/S, it’s obv ya’ weak of course, Ironic; You rocked Chin & ery'one that showed shattered this geeks w/ force. cool, decent tie in That’s fucked dude, it only means that you can’t fight or spar, Ya’ verses are quite The Strain – So Fuck the season @Hush & write his bars. ehhh My fists, Bruce Lee status. You don’t wan’ shoot the 5 w/ em ock, Cross these hands… & yours will end up across your chest… inside of a box. this is tough. See, I’m PR… My kinds fly & it’s facts kids fear to get trampled, If we look into ya’ culture, A Hazmat suite & Doctor’s needed to handle the bacteria sample. solid I’m savage kid, I’m talkin havoc shit taken lives, my set is poppin, Can’t front, ya cans are used on a daily too… Bum needs the 5 cent deposit. ok Dre got this one... Cross the hands was heat, LOTB. Culture was a nice idea and the opener wasn't bad either. Wand had some humor wit peak but not a lot else I liked this week. V/ Dre