The incident of a poor man

Pharaohs Army · 07-07-2015, 12:17 AM

i must admit the first time i caught this a few days ago I did not have the proper cadence down, to what you were doing here. but, revisiting later, i picked up on it the 2nd time, and have determined it is another bold rhyme scheme and rhythm throughout most of it. impressive from a clean/consistent flow, something you've been noticeably improving over the months.. from a content perspective and lyrics, it is good, but not great- by your standards, from what i've seen, in a relative sense. i'm entertained though.

07-07-2015, 12:17 AM	#5
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	i must admit the first time i caught this a few days ago I did not have the proper cadence down, to what you were doing here. but, revisiting later, i picked up on it the 2nd time, and have determined it is another bold rhyme scheme and rhythm throughout most of it. impressive from a clean/consistent flow, something you've been noticeably improving over the months.. from a content perspective and lyrics, it is good, but not great- by your standards, from what i've seen, in a relative sense. i'm entertained though.