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Old 07-03-2015, 06:47 PM   #1
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Listen… It’s a crime scene whenever I’m around… dawg it’s alerting,
If you’re puttin on a murda sho, it’s wack gunbars w/ horrible wording.
You fake as fuck, come to a real hood & watch dude’ll just get flamed,
This faggot’s so see through, I’ll EASILY barium w/ out using an X-Ray.
It’s over when tech’s spray & my guns always known to crush chumps,
If we look this bird’s gun game, he shootin for high scores on duck hunt.
Listen; I’ll knock ya teeth out, ock. You gon’ learn my fist murder kids,
You got NO hands,
So if this lame EVER cleaned a clock, he’s performing horology services.
Just burn those scripts, cuz you a nobody – dawgz, niggas KNOW I’m sick,
& if we took a trip down memory lane, ya brains’ll be scattered all over it.
Hush; Why have me spar w/ the worst dude, my gun bars’ll just murk you,
This fag’s the softest thing to bear arms since the last charmin commercial.




Allen Knight
for a stack, i'll get ur son waxed, shanked & split hoe
once my team Paid in Full, they'll cut'em up worse then Money Mitch bro
all'em bars u jot are trash faggot, im killin fakes
ur Pendred the moment u start writin.. u'll get Wrist locked till it breaks
gotta 44 magnum aimed at ur skull, its lightin gays
sparyin till my Foreclosure eyes faggot & takes your fucking life away
show me my opponent slut, got twin blades killin ur boys
cuz'em Paris sharp & will murda the biggest nigga on ya team like the beggin of Troy
& ur chick always leaves lookin like a 10, da whore is nuts
ur bitch may Dress Up, cuz thats the way im pullin it right before we fuck
come at me about money, my glock makes this faggot hurl
i aint Owen nothin But a shell to ur face till ur blood line extinct like Jurassic World
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Old 07-05-2015, 01:13 PM   #2
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Listen… It’s a crime scene whenever I’m around… dawg it’s alerting,
If you’re puttin on a murda sho, it’s wack gunbars w/ horrible wording.
Ha okay

You fake as fuck, come to a real hood & watch dude’ll just get flamed,
This faggot’s so see through, I’ll EASILY barium w/ out using an X-Ray.
Solid

It’s over when tech’s spray & my guns always known to crush chumps,
If we look this bird’s gun game, he shootin for high scores on duck hunt.
Lol okay

Listen; I’ll knock ya teeth out, ock. You gon’ learn my fist murder kids,
You got NO hands,
So if this lame EVER cleaned a clock, he’s performing horology services.
Heh

Just burn those scripts, cuz you a nobody – dawgz, niggas KNOW I’m sick,
& if we took a trip down memory lane, ya brains’ll be scattered all over it.
Okay

Hush; Why have me spar w/ the worst dude, my gun bars’ll just murk you,
This fag’s the softest thing to bear arms since the last charmin commercial.
Lol haha




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for a stack, i'll get ur son waxed, shanked & split hoe
once my team Paid in Full, they'll cut'em up worse then Money Mitch bro
Okay

all'em bars u jot are trash faggot, im killin fakes
ur Pendred the moment u start writin.. u'll get Wrist locked till it breaks
Heh okay

gotta 44 magnum aimed at ur skull, its lightin gays
sparyin till my Foreclosure eyes faggot & takes your fucking life away
Lol

show me my opponent slut, got twin blades killin ur boys
cuz'em Paris sharp & will murda the biggest nigga on ya team like the beggin of Troy
Ehh ok

& ur chick always leaves lookin like a 10, da whore is nuts
ur bitch may Dress Up, cuz thats the way im pullin it right before we fuck
Okay

come at me about money, my glock makes this faggot hurl
i aint Owen nothin But a shell to ur face till ur blood line extinct like Jurassic World
Okay

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Old 07-06-2015, 02:40 PM   #3
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Oh shit, this was a close one!

Dre had a lot of heat this round, only one I maybe wasn't feeling was the "memory lane" ish and partly because I have a dislike for idioms as I've seen just about all if them done at some point (12 year textcee here, for shame) I understand though some of you guys seen half of what I have so I give you some leeway, that's entirely my personal pigheaded preference but the rest was solid as fuck I can't deny that, your wordings improved a stack!

Listen… It’s a crime scene whenever I’m around… dawg it’s alerting,
If you’re puttin on a murda sho, it’s wack gunbars w/ horrible wording.
You fake as fuck, come to a real hood & watch dude’ll just get flamed,
This faggot’s so see through, I’ll EASILY barium w/ out using an X-Ray.
It’s over when tech’s spray & my guns always known to crush chumps,
If we look this bird’s gun game, he shootin for high scores on duck hunt.
Hush; Why have me spar w/ the worst dude, my gun bars’ll just murk you,
This fag’s the softest thing to bear arms since the last charmin commercial.

I loved that duck hunt shit tbh, can't understand Knuck not feeling that haha! The clean your clock ish just wasn't smooth enough for me that was all

Allen Knight brought that FIRE Pendred shit I thought, dope verse, again stacked with solid hits too to bottom. He's one of my fave reads recently tbh stylistically. First six were all solid back to back, didn't think the Troy line had quite the same impact those first lines hit with, but then he pulled that gutter shit back with the dress up bar:


for a stack, i'll get ur son waxed, shanked & split hoe
once my team Paid in Full, they'll cut'em up worse then Money Mitch bro
all'em bars u jot are trash faggot, im killin fakes
ur Pendred the moment u start writin.. u'll get Wrist locked till it breaks
gotta 44 magnum aimed at ur skull, its lightin gays
sparyin till my Foreclosure eyes faggot & takes your fucking life away
& ur chick always leaves lookin like a 10, da whore is nuts
ur bitch may Dress Up, cuz thats the way im pullin it right before we fuck
come at me about money, my glock makes this faggot hurl
i aint Owen nothin But a shell to ur face till ur blood line extinct like Jurassic World

Yeah that dress up line was worded slick, closer was good but could have been harder yet I still feel like leaving out of the quoteables doesn't do it justice, nahmean? Really close fought battle, it literally comes down to my own personal preference here and Allen Knight just had me leaning his way on consistency with what was quoted. Those first six or so were HARD, he really went in on this one!

Gotta rock with AK this round, good battle bros!
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Old 07-06-2015, 04:57 PM   #4
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Dre
Listen… It’s a crime scene whenever I’m around… dawg it’s alerting,
If you’re puttin on a murda sho, it’s wack gunbars w/ horrible wording.
Funny, jab
You fake as fuck, come to a real hood & watch dude’ll just get flamed,
This faggot’s so see through, I’ll EASILY barium w/ out using an X-Ray.
this was dope
It’s over when tech’s spray & my guns always known to crush chumps,
If we look this bird’s gun game, he shootin for high scores on duck hunt.
cool
Listen; I’ll knock ya teeth out, ock. You gon’ learn my fist murder kids,
You got NO hands,
So if this lame EVER cleaned a clock, he’s performing horology services.
this was cool
Just burn those scripts, cuz you a nobody – dawgz, niggas KNOW I’m sick,
& if we took a trip down memory lane, ya brains’ll be scattered all over it.
dope
Hush; Why have me spar w/ the worst dude, my gun bars’ll just murk you,
This fag’s the softest thing to bear arms since the last charmin commercial.
lol nice



Allen Knight
for a stack, i'll get ur son waxed, shanked & split hoe
once my team Paid in Full, they'll cut'em up worse then Money Mitch bro
meh
all'em bars u jot are trash faggot, im killin fakes
ur Pendred the moment u start writin.. u'll get Wrist locked till it breaks
dope
gotta 44 magnum aimed at ur skull, its lightin gays
sparyin till my Foreclosure eyes faggot & takes your fucking life away
dope
show me my opponent slut, got twin blades killin ur boys
cuz'em Paris sharp & will murda the biggest nigga on ya team like the beggin of Troy
i see wat u did here, dope
& ur chick always leaves lookin like a 10, da whore is nuts
ur bitch may Dress Up, cuz thats the way im pullin it right before we fuck
nah
come at me about money, my glock makes this faggot hurl
i aint Owen nothin But a shell to ur face till ur blood line extinct like Jurassic World
to wordy

overall dope battle fellas. felt AK had a few more misses to dre's jabs. dre was more consistent imo, and i got him edging this

v/Dre
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Old 07-06-2015, 05:07 PM   #5
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It’s over when tech’s spray & my guns always known to crush chumps,
If we look this bird’s gun game, he shootin for high scores on duck hunt.

Just burn those scripts, cuz you a nobody – dawgz, niggas KNOW I’m sick,
& if we took a trip down memory lane, ya brains’ll be scattered all over it.
Hush; Why have me spar w/ the worst dude, my gun bars’ll just murk you,
This fag’s the softest thing to bear arms since the last charmin commercial.

^^^^
The quotes above were some of my fave's from Dre's verse
the most enjoyable part for me was the memory lane line...
that was slick, that last line was pretty cute as well..
on another note I did enjoy the X Ray line, just not the build up

all'em bars u jot are trash faggot, im killin fakes
ur Pendred the moment u start writin.. u'll get Wrist locked till it breaks
gotta 44 magnum aimed at ur skull, its lightin gays
sparyin till my Foreclosure eyes faggot & takes your fucking life away


come at me about money, my glock makes this faggot hurl
i aint Owen nothin But a shell to ur face till ur blood line extinct like Jurassic World


^^^^

I enjoyed these lines from Allen's as well
the only thing I was hung up on was the beginning of Troy line
not saying I didn't get it, it just threw me off..
otherwise I really enjoyed the opener, that was slick

v/I thought this was a pretty even battle but I feel like Allen edged it out for me
I felt like Dre came slick as well but Allen had more quotables for me...
nice battle fella's
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Old 07-06-2015, 05:07 PM   #6
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It’s over when tech’s spray & my guns always known to crush chumps,
If we look this bird’s gun game, he shootin for high scores on duck hunt.

Just burn those scripts, cuz you a nobody – dawgz, niggas KNOW I’m sick,
& if we took a trip down memory lane, ya brains’ll be scattered all over it.
Hush; Why have me spar w/ the worst dude, my gun bars’ll just murk you,
This fag’s the softest thing to bear arms since the last charmin commercial.

^^^^
The quotes above were some of my fave's from Dre's verse
the most enjoyable part for me was the memory lane line...
that was slick, that last line was pretty cute as well..
on another note I did enjoy the X Ray line, just not the build up

all'em bars u jot are trash faggot, im killin fakes
ur Pendred the moment u start writin.. u'll get Wrist locked till it breaks
gotta 44 magnum aimed at ur skull, its lightin gays
sparyin till my Foreclosure eyes faggot & takes your fucking life away


come at me about money, my glock makes this faggot hurl
i aint Owen nothin But a shell to ur face till ur blood line extinct like Jurassic World


^^^^

I enjoyed these lines from Allen's as well
the only thing I was hung up on was the beginning of Troy line
not saying I didn't get it, it just threw me off..
otherwise I really enjoyed the opener, that was slick

v/I thought this was a pretty even battle but I feel like Allen edged it out for me
I felt like Dre came slick as well but Allen had more quotables for me...
nice battle fella's
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Listen… It’s a crime scene whenever I’m around… dawg it’s alerting,
If you’re puttin on a murda sho, it’s wack gunbars w/ horrible wording.
^this has been done
You fake as fuck, come to a real hood & watch dude’ll just get flamed,
This faggot’s so see through, I’ll EASILY barium w/ out using an X-Ray.
^seen the wp too many times before. not necessarily in punchlines but in jokes & shit
It’s over when tech’s spray & my guns always known to crush chumps,
If we look this bird’s gun game, he shootin for high scores on duck hunt.
^okay
Listen; I’ll knock ya teeth out, ock. You gon’ learn my fist murder kids,
You got NO hands,
So if this lame EVER cleaned a clock, he’s performing horology services.
^didnt know that idiom, but i looked it up. yea, this is solid
Just burn those scripts, cuz you a nobody – dawgz, niggas KNOW I’m sick,
& if we took a trip down memory lane, ya brains’ll be scattered all over it.
^eh, seen this flipped better. think it was kung who did it. but yea, solid idea, just not the freshest & i've seen better flips
Hush; Why have me spar w/ the worst dude, my gun bars’ll just murk you,
This fag’s the softest thing to bear arms since the last charmin commercial.
^okay cool

vs.

for a stack, i'll get ur son waxed, shanked & split hoe
once my team Paid in Full, they'll cut'em up worse then Money Mitch bro
^kinda simple
all'em bars u jot are trash faggot, im killin fakes
ur Pendred the moment u start writin.. u'll get Wrist locked till it breaks
^okay cool
gotta 44 magnum aimed at ur skull, its lightin gays
sparyin till my Foreclosure eyes faggot & takes your fucking life away
^i can make that work. solid
show me my opponent slut, got twin blades killin ur boys
cuz'em Paris sharp & will murda the biggest nigga on ya team like the beggin of Troy
^okay
& ur chick always leaves lookin like a 10, da whore is nuts
ur bitch may Dress Up, cuz thats the way im pullin it right before we fuck
^nice wording. hit cuz of that
come at me about money, my glock makes this faggot hurl
i aint Owen nothin But a shell to ur face till ur blood line extinct like Jurassic World
^first part of punchline was cool, the 2nd part was kinda messy. still decent

this is close. props to both. it's a good read tbh. i think i got allen. bit more consistent & one more quotable. also dre had some concepts that i've seen before, and those didn't hit to me cuz of that. but yea. good battle.
v/ak
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Old 07-07-2015, 08:55 AM   #8
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