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07-03-2015, 06:47 PM | #1 |
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SHADOW BOXING rnd2 - Dre vs Allen Knight {Allen Knight wins}
Dre
Listen… It’s a crime scene whenever I’m around… dawg it’s alerting, If you’re puttin on a murda sho, it’s wack gunbars w/ horrible wording. You fake as fuck, come to a real hood & watch dude’ll just get flamed, This faggot’s so see through, I’ll EASILY barium w/ out using an X-Ray. It’s over when tech’s spray & my guns always known to crush chumps, If we look this bird’s gun game, he shootin for high scores on duck hunt. Listen; I’ll knock ya teeth out, ock. You gon’ learn my fist murder kids, You got NO hands, So if this lame EVER cleaned a clock, he’s performing horology services. Just burn those scripts, cuz you a nobody – dawgz, niggas KNOW I’m sick, & if we took a trip down memory lane, ya brains’ll be scattered all over it. Hush; Why have me spar w/ the worst dude, my gun bars’ll just murk you, This fag’s the softest thing to bear arms since the last charmin commercial. Allen Knight for a stack, i'll get ur son waxed, shanked & split hoe once my team Paid in Full, they'll cut'em up worse then Money Mitch bro all'em bars u jot are trash faggot, im killin fakes ur Pendred the moment u start writin.. u'll get Wrist locked till it breaks gotta 44 magnum aimed at ur skull, its lightin gays sparyin till my Foreclosure eyes faggot & takes your fucking life away show me my opponent slut, got twin blades killin ur boys cuz'em Paris sharp & will murda the biggest nigga on ya team like the beggin of Troy & ur chick always leaves lookin like a 10, da whore is nuts ur bitch may Dress Up, cuz thats the way im pullin it right before we fuck come at me about money, my glock makes this faggot hurl i aint Owen nothin But a shell to ur face till ur blood line extinct like Jurassic World
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07-05-2015, 01:13 PM | #2 |
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Listen… It’s a crime scene whenever I’m around… dawg it’s alerting,
If you’re puttin on a murda sho, it’s wack gunbars w/ horrible wording. Ha okay You fake as fuck, come to a real hood & watch dude’ll just get flamed, This faggot’s so see through, I’ll EASILY barium w/ out using an X-Ray. Solid It’s over when tech’s spray & my guns always known to crush chumps, If we look this bird’s gun game, he shootin for high scores on duck hunt. Lol okay Listen; I’ll knock ya teeth out, ock. You gon’ learn my fist murder kids, You got NO hands, So if this lame EVER cleaned a clock, he’s performing horology services. Heh Just burn those scripts, cuz you a nobody – dawgz, niggas KNOW I’m sick, & if we took a trip down memory lane, ya brains’ll be scattered all over it. Okay Hush; Why have me spar w/ the worst dude, my gun bars’ll just murk you, This fag’s the softest thing to bear arms since the last charmin commercial. Lol haha Allen Knight for a stack, i'll get ur son waxed, shanked & split hoe once my team Paid in Full, they'll cut'em up worse then Money Mitch bro Okay all'em bars u jot are trash faggot, im killin fakes ur Pendred the moment u start writin.. u'll get Wrist locked till it breaks Heh okay gotta 44 magnum aimed at ur skull, its lightin gays sparyin till my Foreclosure eyes faggot & takes your fucking life away Lol show me my opponent slut, got twin blades killin ur boys cuz'em Paris sharp & will murda the biggest nigga on ya team like the beggin of Troy Ehh ok & ur chick always leaves lookin like a 10, da whore is nuts ur bitch may Dress Up, cuz thats the way im pullin it right before we fuck Okay come at me about money, my glock makes this faggot hurl i aint Owen nothin But a shell to ur face till ur blood line extinct like Jurassic World Okay V dre |
07-06-2015, 02:40 PM | #3 |
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Oh shit, this was a close one!
Dre had a lot of heat this round, only one I maybe wasn't feeling was the "memory lane" ish and partly because I have a dislike for idioms as I've seen just about all if them done at some point (12 year textcee here, for shame) I understand though some of you guys seen half of what I have so I give you some leeway, that's entirely my personal pigheaded preference but the rest was solid as fuck I can't deny that, your wordings improved a stack! Listen… It’s a crime scene whenever I’m around… dawg it’s alerting, If you’re puttin on a murda sho, it’s wack gunbars w/ horrible wording. You fake as fuck, come to a real hood & watch dude’ll just get flamed, This faggot’s so see through, I’ll EASILY barium w/ out using an X-Ray. It’s over when tech’s spray & my guns always known to crush chumps, If we look this bird’s gun game, he shootin for high scores on duck hunt. Hush; Why have me spar w/ the worst dude, my gun bars’ll just murk you, This fag’s the softest thing to bear arms since the last charmin commercial. I loved that duck hunt shit tbh, can't understand Knuck not feeling that haha! The clean your clock ish just wasn't smooth enough for me that was all Allen Knight brought that FIRE Pendred shit I thought, dope verse, again stacked with solid hits too to bottom. He's one of my fave reads recently tbh stylistically. First six were all solid back to back, didn't think the Troy line had quite the same impact those first lines hit with, but then he pulled that gutter shit back with the dress up bar: for a stack, i'll get ur son waxed, shanked & split hoe once my team Paid in Full, they'll cut'em up worse then Money Mitch bro all'em bars u jot are trash faggot, im killin fakes ur Pendred the moment u start writin.. u'll get Wrist locked till it breaks gotta 44 magnum aimed at ur skull, its lightin gays sparyin till my Foreclosure eyes faggot & takes your fucking life away & ur chick always leaves lookin like a 10, da whore is nuts ur bitch may Dress Up, cuz thats the way im pullin it right before we fuck come at me about money, my glock makes this faggot hurl i aint Owen nothin But a shell to ur face till ur blood line extinct like Jurassic World Yeah that dress up line was worded slick, closer was good but could have been harder yet I still feel like leaving out of the quoteables doesn't do it justice, nahmean? Really close fought battle, it literally comes down to my own personal preference here and Allen Knight just had me leaning his way on consistency with what was quoted. Those first six or so were HARD, he really went in on this one! Gotta rock with AK this round, good battle bros! |
07-06-2015, 04:57 PM | #4 |
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Dre
Listen… It’s a crime scene whenever I’m around… dawg it’s alerting, If you’re puttin on a murda sho, it’s wack gunbars w/ horrible wording. Funny, jab You fake as fuck, come to a real hood & watch dude’ll just get flamed, This faggot’s so see through, I’ll EASILY barium w/ out using an X-Ray. this was dope It’s over when tech’s spray & my guns always known to crush chumps, If we look this bird’s gun game, he shootin for high scores on duck hunt. cool Listen; I’ll knock ya teeth out, ock. You gon’ learn my fist murder kids, You got NO hands, So if this lame EVER cleaned a clock, he’s performing horology services. this was cool Just burn those scripts, cuz you a nobody – dawgz, niggas KNOW I’m sick, & if we took a trip down memory lane, ya brains’ll be scattered all over it. dope Hush; Why have me spar w/ the worst dude, my gun bars’ll just murk you, This fag’s the softest thing to bear arms since the last charmin commercial. lol nice Allen Knight for a stack, i'll get ur son waxed, shanked & split hoe once my team Paid in Full, they'll cut'em up worse then Money Mitch bro meh all'em bars u jot are trash faggot, im killin fakes ur Pendred the moment u start writin.. u'll get Wrist locked till it breaks dope gotta 44 magnum aimed at ur skull, its lightin gays sparyin till my Foreclosure eyes faggot & takes your fucking life away dope show me my opponent slut, got twin blades killin ur boys cuz'em Paris sharp & will murda the biggest nigga on ya team like the beggin of Troy i see wat u did here, dope & ur chick always leaves lookin like a 10, da whore is nuts ur bitch may Dress Up, cuz thats the way im pullin it right before we fuck nah come at me about money, my glock makes this faggot hurl i aint Owen nothin But a shell to ur face till ur blood line extinct like Jurassic World to wordy overall dope battle fellas. felt AK had a few more misses to dre's jabs. dre was more consistent imo, and i got him edging this v/Dre |
07-06-2015, 05:07 PM | #5 |
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It’s over when tech’s spray & my guns always known to crush chumps,
If we look this bird’s gun game, he shootin for high scores on duck hunt. Just burn those scripts, cuz you a nobody – dawgz, niggas KNOW I’m sick, & if we took a trip down memory lane, ya brains’ll be scattered all over it. Hush; Why have me spar w/ the worst dude, my gun bars’ll just murk you, This fag’s the softest thing to bear arms since the last charmin commercial. ^^^^ The quotes above were some of my fave's from Dre's verse the most enjoyable part for me was the memory lane line... that was slick, that last line was pretty cute as well.. on another note I did enjoy the X Ray line, just not the build up all'em bars u jot are trash faggot, im killin fakes ur Pendred the moment u start writin.. u'll get Wrist locked till it breaks gotta 44 magnum aimed at ur skull, its lightin gays sparyin till my Foreclosure eyes faggot & takes your fucking life away come at me about money, my glock makes this faggot hurl i aint Owen nothin But a shell to ur face till ur blood line extinct like Jurassic World ^^^^ I enjoyed these lines from Allen's as well the only thing I was hung up on was the beginning of Troy line not saying I didn't get it, it just threw me off.. otherwise I really enjoyed the opener, that was slick v/I thought this was a pretty even battle but I feel like Allen edged it out for me I felt like Dre came slick as well but Allen had more quotables for me... nice battle fella's
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07-06-2015, 05:07 PM | #6 |
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It’s over when tech’s spray & my guns always known to crush chumps,
If we look this bird’s gun game, he shootin for high scores on duck hunt. Just burn those scripts, cuz you a nobody – dawgz, niggas KNOW I’m sick, & if we took a trip down memory lane, ya brains’ll be scattered all over it. Hush; Why have me spar w/ the worst dude, my gun bars’ll just murk you, This fag’s the softest thing to bear arms since the last charmin commercial. ^^^^ The quotes above were some of my fave's from Dre's verse the most enjoyable part for me was the memory lane line... that was slick, that last line was pretty cute as well.. on another note I did enjoy the X Ray line, just not the build up all'em bars u jot are trash faggot, im killin fakes ur Pendred the moment u start writin.. u'll get Wrist locked till it breaks gotta 44 magnum aimed at ur skull, its lightin gays sparyin till my Foreclosure eyes faggot & takes your fucking life away come at me about money, my glock makes this faggot hurl i aint Owen nothin But a shell to ur face till ur blood line extinct like Jurassic World ^^^^ I enjoyed these lines from Allen's as well the only thing I was hung up on was the beginning of Troy line not saying I didn't get it, it just threw me off.. otherwise I really enjoyed the opener, that was slick v/I thought this was a pretty even battle but I feel like Allen edged it out for me I felt like Dre came slick as well but Allen had more quotables for me... nice battle fella's
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07-06-2015, 06:52 PM | #7 |
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Listen… It’s a crime scene whenever I’m around… dawg it’s alerting,
If you’re puttin on a murda sho, it’s wack gunbars w/ horrible wording. ^this has been done You fake as fuck, come to a real hood & watch dude’ll just get flamed, This faggot’s so see through, I’ll EASILY barium w/ out using an X-Ray. ^seen the wp too many times before. not necessarily in punchlines but in jokes & shit It’s over when tech’s spray & my guns always known to crush chumps, If we look this bird’s gun game, he shootin for high scores on duck hunt. ^okay Listen; I’ll knock ya teeth out, ock. You gon’ learn my fist murder kids, You got NO hands, So if this lame EVER cleaned a clock, he’s performing horology services. ^didnt know that idiom, but i looked it up. yea, this is solid Just burn those scripts, cuz you a nobody – dawgz, niggas KNOW I’m sick, & if we took a trip down memory lane, ya brains’ll be scattered all over it. ^eh, seen this flipped better. think it was kung who did it. but yea, solid idea, just not the freshest & i've seen better flips Hush; Why have me spar w/ the worst dude, my gun bars’ll just murk you, This fag’s the softest thing to bear arms since the last charmin commercial. ^okay cool vs. for a stack, i'll get ur son waxed, shanked & split hoe once my team Paid in Full, they'll cut'em up worse then Money Mitch bro ^kinda simple all'em bars u jot are trash faggot, im killin fakes ur Pendred the moment u start writin.. u'll get Wrist locked till it breaks ^okay cool gotta 44 magnum aimed at ur skull, its lightin gays sparyin till my Foreclosure eyes faggot & takes your fucking life away ^i can make that work. solid show me my opponent slut, got twin blades killin ur boys cuz'em Paris sharp & will murda the biggest nigga on ya team like the beggin of Troy ^okay & ur chick always leaves lookin like a 10, da whore is nuts ur bitch may Dress Up, cuz thats the way im pullin it right before we fuck ^nice wording. hit cuz of that come at me about money, my glock makes this faggot hurl i aint Owen nothin But a shell to ur face till ur blood line extinct like Jurassic World ^first part of punchline was cool, the 2nd part was kinda messy. still decent this is close. props to both. it's a good read tbh. i think i got allen. bit more consistent & one more quotable. also dre had some concepts that i've seen before, and those didn't hit to me cuz of that. but yea. good battle. v/ak |
07-07-2015, 08:55 AM | #8 |
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5-2 Allen wins
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