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Old 07-05-2015, 04:52 PM   #1
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disclaimer like before - not experienced with this but wanna help so take or leave it, not offended if you don't wanna count my vote.

aight so

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this was interesting, stream of thoughty stuff - it looked (to me) like you started with the picture then just let whatever happened happen, which was cool. It had a few weak spots but it felt like a verse or swag and flow drop to a topic.

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felt like a more standard poetic approach like the one I would find in an english class textbook (not that it's bad, I just associate short lines and ABAB structure with that) but I like that you took the picture, interpreted both what was there and what you could put into it - your verse gave me a sense of what happened next pretty effectively in a concise manner and that was the difference for me

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@Innovator that's vote number 2 for me you can put that into the NBL tab
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