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Join Date: Jun 2015
Location: New York
Posts: 2,047
Battle Record: 16-9
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My biggest fan... so you in love? That shit ain't cute you need checkin
If I jumped off a fuckin bridge & that was the end of Jun... you'd leap second I think you could have been harsher w/ this. Concept was cool but execution was mild to me. Quote:
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I try to write how I live... what you rap is nothin like what you've did Homie ain't hard, no bud tender... I live in Cali, I'll have u delivered right to the crib I think this had potential, execution was type mild IMO tho. I hit the 7-eleven cuz me n your mom was needin a dutch She gettin the Big Gulp special all summer too if we gon keep it a buck Didn't like this much. Quote:
Pretty consistent verse, Junto. Pretty much enjoyed all but the closer, man. Props... Quote:
---------------------------------------- vs ---------------------------------------- What a lame faggot. You suck w/ the Pen You got Fucking Devoured by Tic n you let my vote Get Under Your Skin? Had potential to be a solid personal/haymaker. Typically don't like bars that end in a form of a question, takes away a lot of the impact, IMO. That alias shit is str8 FAGGOT. You KNOW it's fake But it's like that New Recognition Tech We can Tell you are A Bitch before you even show your Face You long winded mother fucker... This was stretched as fuck, bruh. Concept OK but execution was mild. Quote:
This Liars mine. How lame u are Inquires Minds Ur like dinosaurs in Jurrasic Park. We know Ur Fake. You ACTUALLY had the Fuzz on you the Entire Time Didn't like this much and was stretched as fuck, wtf lol? Quote:
U sell dope? I'll rob u . Fuck who funds ya bricks U think the Grass is Solid Footing. But if You Step? You'll die in the Trap no Punji Sticks Eh, wasn't feelin this too much bro... I think you could have been a lil more harsher on the execution here. Fell flat for me. Quote:
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Pretty decent verse, Muff. My only complaint is; a few of your bars were stretched like fuck, bro. Try and simmer down you long winded insomniac ass father fucker. Also, as you already know my dislikes for similes lol... I think it's corny to have "like", "Like" and "Like" tie ins which can be formed and more effective/creative if actually used as a metaphor, IMO. But do you. Not really feelin your "New style" per say of writing. Not to mention your structure is weird and the format is hard to follow at times. But overall a pretty consistent verse as well. Quote:
---------------------------------------- This battle was close as fuck to judge man. Both of these dudes were consistent for the most part and I typically try and stray away from these types of breakdowns but didn't have a choice after reading the battle 5 times. 3 out of 5 of the times I was leaning towards Junto, due to preference but wanted to ensure I gave proper feedback for something as close as this battle. IMO, style preference, Junto but Muff had his ups and downs as well if you look at the actual B4B breakdown. If Muff would have executed those bars a lil harsher, IMO he could have had this battle. I just think Junto's personals were a lot better and more effective then the personals Muff tried to execute on. So w/ that being said... Really nothing more that can be said other then... v/Junto |
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