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Old 06-20-2015, 01:55 AM   #1
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You ain't got a Strong Hold on ya Style, & I'm not in the mood..
I'll put such a Spike in ya head, you could be the face of Got2b Glued
I'm always showing attack, so it's only right I'm holdin the gat..
'N when I Pull It and Dump, ya guts'll be allllll over. You'd think they brought back Nickelodeon Gak
Not even ONE Champ accomp on ya record. You're a lame bro, get it?
You don't just suck, you're Hittin New Loews that would make James Holmes jealous
You'll get wrecked 'n hurt. Ya life? You can't defend it twerp
If there's a fight, you'll Tuck in Every Corner like suits gettin dressed for work
Ya girl really doubts you 'n now she's packin up her clothes
She thinks you're a loser Credential leave you for having none of those
...& she enjoys playin House, she loves when I'm raw in her cooch
The way I Blow her Back Out for Support, you'd think I fuckin Dormered the roof
Words mean shit. Think anyone believes this kids spiel? Listen..
Truth is..ya style's equipped w/ more Bitch Filled Bars than Litchfield prison
Word on the street is there's a snitch on NC...it HAS to be Cred, shit..
Keep talkin & I'll put the Edge to the Side of ya Face like the Galaxy S6
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Old 06-20-2015, 02:59 PM   #2
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U big nose retail employee idiot. U Broke & u suk bitch
Muhfucka u work at Sports Authority.. dat dnt fukin mean u Ballin' & Run shit
ok
If we talkin gun bars? I aim & blast it, I stay wit a ratchet
That 45 Blow his fukin Roof off wen the banger is aimed Attic
hmm.. Yeah I like it
I'm the creator of doom, my shit Concrete dats y its hate in da room
I'll give a new meaning to Set in Stone, & put ya whole Crews names on a Tomb
ok
A beast, I'm a ape. U haven't champed shit, u wont b seen as a great
U'll neva b King bitch.. last week Dat nigga had u fanning him & feedin em grapes
didnt get it
Dis homo is finished, da voters r smokin dope if u win this
I advise u Inkorperate mre punches.. dat Pen game aint givin no one da Business
not feeling
I'll dish'em clips, but I'll beat his whole fam up cus im quik wit fists
& u cud get ya grandfather clocked.. code name- how I get rid of Tic
meh
Gunbar killa off the piff, right now I'm higher then jet fumes
Cuz that shotty'll put this bitch on the wall like a womens restroom
haha ok
I'm bck! At a pivotal time, NC loves dat gutta shit + I'm slick wit da rhymes
U remind me of da neck on a corona bottle.. Bitch u aint fit for the lime
cool

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Originally Posted by Tic View Post
You ain't got a Strong Hold on ya Style, & I'm not in the mood..
I'll put such a Spike in ya head, you could be the face of Got2b Glued
cool
I'm always showing attack, so it's only right I'm holdin the gat..
'N when I Pull It and Dump, ya guts'll be allllll over. You'd think they brought back Nickelodeon Gak
ok
Not even ONE Champ accomp on ya record. You're a lame bro, get it?
You don't just suck, you're Hittin New Loews that would make James Holmes jealous
nah
You'll get wrecked 'n hurt. Ya life? You can't defend it twerp
If there's a fight, you'll Tuck in Every Corner like suits gettin dressed for work
cool
Ya girl really doubts you 'n now she's packin up her clothes
She thinks you're a loser Credential leave you for having none of those
I keep reading this over and just can't get it bro
...& she enjoys playin House, she loves when I'm raw in her cooch
The way I Blow her Back Out for Support, you'd think I fuckin Dormered the roof
not feeling
Words mean shit. Think anyone believes this kids spiel? Listen..
Truth is..ya style's equipped w/ more Bitch Filled Bars than Litchfield prison
I guess...
Word on the street is there's a snitch on NC...it HAS to be Cred, shit..
Keep talkin & I'll put the Edge to the Side of ya Face like the Galaxy S6
not for me
This was close. Both came solidly enough but I dunno. Overall I gotta go with Cred tbh. Enjoyed the dudes verse more

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Old 06-21-2015, 01:30 AM   #3
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Originally Posted by Cred View Post
U big nose retail employee idiot. U Broke & u suk bitch
Muhfucka u work at Sports Authority.. dat dnt fukin mean u Ballin' & Run shit
straight personal
If we talkin gun bars? I aim & blast it, I stay wit a ratchet
That 45 Blow his fukin Roof off wen the banger is aimed Attic
cool but slightly forced
I'm the creator of doom, my shit Concrete dats y its hate in da room
I'll give a new meaning to Set in Stone, & put ya whole Crews names on a Tomb
aight i guess
A beast, I'm a ape. U haven't champed shit, u wont b seen as a great
U'll neva b King bitch.. last week Dat nigga had u fanning him & feedin em grapes
cool
Dis homo is finished, da voters r smokin dope if u win this
I advise u Inkorperate mre punches.. dat Pen game aint givin no one da Business
meh
I'll dish'em clips, but I'll beat his whole fam up cus im quik wit fists
& u cud get ya grandfather clocked.. code name- how I get rid of Tic
liked the concept but wording is off
Gunbar killa off the piff, right now I'm higher then jet fumes
Cuz that shotty'll put this bitch on the wall like a womens restroom
don't like that you keep calling out your gun bars. concept is ok here, but didn't quite hit the execution
I'm bck! At a pivotal time, NC loves dat gutta shit + I'm slick wit da rhymes
U remind me of da neck on a corona bottle.. Bitch u aint fit for the lime
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Originally Posted by Tic View Post
You ain't got a Strong Hold on ya Style, & I'm not in the mood..
I'll put such a Spike in ya head, you could be the face of Got2b Glued
meh
I'm always showing attack, so it's only right I'm holdin the gat..
'N when I Pull It and Dump, ya guts'll be allllll over. You'd think they brought back Nickelodeon Gak
cool
Not even ONE Champ accomp on ya record. You're a lame bro, get it?
You don't just suck, you're Hittin New Loews that would make James Holmes jealous
could have set this up better. really need to with the obscure reference
You'll get wrecked 'n hurt. Ya life? You can't defend it twerp
If there's a fight, you'll Tuck in Every Corner like suits gettin dressed for work
simple but ok
Ya girl really doubts you 'n now she's packin up her clothes
She thinks you're a loser Credential leave you for having none of those
nice wp
...& she enjoys playin House, she loves when I'm raw in her cooch
The way I Blow her Back Out for Support, you'd think I fuckin Dormered the roof
nope. and don't like the end rhymes here
Words mean shit. Think anyone believes this kids spiel? Listen..
Truth is..ya style's equipped w/ more Bitch Filled Bars than Litchfield prison
cool. better setup would have helped this.
Word on the street is there's a snitch on NC...it HAS to be Cred, shit..
Keep talkin & I'll put the Edge to the Side of ya Face like the Galaxy S6
nice, haven't seen this one done before
Pretty even here. Cred had Sports Authority, Attic, King, and Corona. Tic had Gak, Credential, Litchfield, and S6. About even on the misses, but overall solid verses from both. This basically comes down to personal preference, and I think Tic showed a little bit more creativity, and generally had better wording. Some of the obscure references hurt him, but I think his quotes were overall a little better than creds. But that's not to take anything away from Cred, I liked the swagger of his verse, just think Tic edged it.

Vote: Tic
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