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Old 06-16-2015, 03:36 AM   #1
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They kept the curtains low, cause they ain't heard of shows I served before
all the dust now I'm allergic, gross, hurtin' folks with sick lines & I'm the germaphobe
rocking Lurch's robes making a Kermit toast, none of my business, slurp & pose
a serpent's hope in the birth of ho's eatin' up these perfect roles...
I don't want to risk ampin' em', crack jokes & end up with a split abdomen
your bitch askin' if you bloodsuckers would like a chrysanthemum
If I can't do it, it can't be done, take your 2 cents & and value them
Scrooge McDuck to you lucid fucks that try and bend the rules too much
Punky Brewster stuff, stick close to what you produce or I'll lose you love...
it ain't love it's abandonment, I nursed the wounds & then bandaged it
arose the immaculate with passages that made Hawaii look like Los Angeles
I'm ravenous in the caverns, how can I prove it the way you'd imagine it
I'm servin' Bad Santa gifts while you faggot kids ask if I want sandwiches
jammin' this pattern in like a batterin' ram that came crashin' in
with a camera broadcastin' it from your moms massive hips..
weighed her & let you grasp the tip, cause that concept is fat as shit!!!
half the time I'm like Janet's tit exposing patriots like the panthers did
then made Pac rap the shit which made Illuminati blast the kid..
Mike Tyson to Holyfield, the Bryant family eating a Kobe meal
crampin' my style with that aerobic feel & no motive still...
shiiiiit I don't need to go on with comparisons I'm just making small talk
I think @Genocide needs to start AA like an aardvark...

Waka waka waka...
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Old 06-16-2015, 06:21 PM   #2
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I really enjoyed the Punky Brewster/produce line

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Old 06-17-2015, 05:20 PM   #3
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Scrooge McDuck was fire!!!!

Lot of illness in here. Loved the Lurch's robes shindig, Geno starting aa like an aardvark was Lulzy too

almost reminded me of Copy's steez but this was more technical in some kinda way, you know? it feels weird saying that but I can't really describe what I mean exactly atm

really enjoyable read bruh

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Old 06-17-2015, 05:31 PM   #4
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You didnt like my Garden of Eden line. :(










I needed an apple never mind :)
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