SINCE MUFF GOT FLAWLESSED IN THE NBL CHAMP MATCH HE NEVER DESERVED AND THEN SIGNED OUT THE LEAGUE LIKE A CRYBABY FAGGOT HERE'S THE PINKSLIP VERSE I WROTE FOR HIM

Ghost1 · 06-14-2015, 05:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lil Muffin

say shit about my dad you must be retarded to step to me
this ain't tommy boy but the Callahan you ur life for fucking w/ Father's Legacy

My mom was a Revlon model

Ur pops diabetic. So I talk to god & pray it's fatal.
FUCK ur father's legacy. Only thing ur father's legacy is an operating table
He got one foot in the grave. That shits a bad look dog.
Good luck trynna lean on him as a father figure wen they cut that fat niggers foot off
U too busy writing gunbars to help him, shit is just bogus
U Lost ur job n he's gon die cuz the only real shots u dodgin are his insulin doses.
An u said ur white mom's a Revlon model. Man that's the stuff!
But ain't enuff make ups in the world to take back all them black cocks she sucked
Me? I got the winning ticket. ur parents r just cursed...
But fuck Mulatto scratch off.... YOUR mother clawed at ur skin in embrassment at birth
Darin nigpen jr. Lesson is? muff's name is painful.
Fuckin mongrel. They named u nigpen after the cage they kept u in under the table.
Shoulda aborted u. Boardin got ur sad ass breaking down
But u died inside ages ago cuz wen u went off the deep end the black half of u drowned.
He ain't been hungry since b boys. An on rb he's the fagot type.
Guess all that jiz he was talm bout eatin off his hand musta curbed his fuckin appetite.
Got fired from his submarine gig...wow. but the best shit is....
He can't even harbor a grudge.....cuz this piece of shit ain't allowed on the premises
Ur a freakin slob. Maybe u could get work if u speak to god?
for that to happen it'd B Magic.....but u too busy bitin all his bars to apply for a decent job.

Muff u a lame forever.

Public Enema · 06-14-2015, 05:24 PM

Not bad.

Some ass bars sprinkled w/ gems

Opener was dope af I must admit

But no @ nig pen and a cpl others

Lol that's pretty bad

Otherwise good drop

Ghost1 · 06-14-2015, 05:26 PM

Stfu lame. Gtfo my thread. Get sum air.

Public Enema · 06-14-2015, 05:27 PM

You would have lost

I'm kinda mad you didn't keep this

Because you aren't that good.

Lol tbr

Not enough make ups ti make up black cock she sucked!

haha boy u ass

Cool opener

Ghost1 · 06-14-2015, 05:29 PM

Of course u would say that.

I waited for u

Even said let's do it in nbl

Then u signed out.

Ur a cornball dude

An u wouldn't have beat that verse lol.

Public Enema · 06-14-2015, 05:31 PM

These are all terrible bags

He got one foot in the grave. That shits a bad look dog.
Good luck trynna lean on him as a father figure wen they cut that fat niggers foot off
U too busy writing gunbars to help him, shit is just bogus
U Lost ur job n he's gon die cuz the only real shots u dodgin are his insulin doses.
An u said ur white mom's a Revlon model. Man that's the stuff!
But ain't enuff make ups in the world to take back all them black cocks she sucked
Me? I got the winning ticket. ur parents r just cursed...
But fuck Mulatto scratch off.... YOUR mother clawed at ur skin in embrassment at birth
Darin nigpen jr. Lesson is? muff's name is painful.
Fuckin mongrel. They named u nigpen after the cage they kept u in under the table.
Shoulda aborted u. Boardin got ur sad ass breaking down
But u died inside ages ago cuz wen u went off the deep end the black half of u drowned.
He ain't been hungry since b boys. An on rb he's the fagot type.
Guess all that jiz he was talm bout eatin off his hand musta curbed his fuckin appetit

I'm dodging my dad's insulin doSes

Black half drowned? What r u talking about lol

Lmao. All of the above is absolute ass

The rest is good

So

6/20

sral · 06-14-2015, 05:35 PM

DEAD @ THOSE FIRST FOUR LINES THO AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA

Ghost1 · 06-14-2015, 05:35 PM

Lol sn00p shit was wack

Bunch of generics on the most personal ridden person here

An u still lost

An idk why u "trying to give me props"

About a verse where I called your father a nigger and wished death on him

Lol

What is wrong with u ?

Junto · 06-14-2015, 05:36 PM

stick to writing about slurpin cock from the 1st person Amen perspective...
you excel at that

This is garbage

Ghost1 · 06-14-2015, 05:38 PM

LMFAO this butt hurt faggot is back after a 4 day hiatus an deleting every post he posted then quitting nbl!?

Lol

I'm glad u overcame that breakdown. Emotional fuckin loser lol.

King Karaoke · 06-14-2015, 05:38 PM

Hi...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Junto

stick to writing about slurpin cock from the 1st person Amen perspective...
you excel at that

This is garbage

Bye...

Geno · 06-14-2015, 05:39 PM

The nigpen was personals homeboh prolly dont know about.
This shit was killer for realz. I mean make a man hide his head under the blanket and stay put killer.

Public Enema · 06-14-2015, 05:39 PM

Anyone who is currently battling can testify

Thst this is trash

I'm not even kidding

lol.

Bags . I'll sign BACK in just to demolish this verse lol

Public Enema · 06-14-2015, 05:43 PM

So snoops verse was wack now?/generic

Umm his whole verse was chock full of personals

U can't cut it. Sorry
@Sn00p

Take a long look bro

lol

Geno · 06-14-2015, 05:44 PM

Dude..
The shit aint trash though by any means.
Im a pretty fair judge of battle bars and persojals.. and this is loaded with personals u mighg not realize. Thats why its not trash. It actually hits pretty hard imo

Ghost1 · 06-14-2015, 05:45 PM

Every1 seen the verse now ?

Ur a lame for real dude.

An only people sayin shits wack in here are butt hurt faggots who mad at me

Public Enema · 06-14-2015, 05:47 PM

Genocide

U have not participated in or voted on any battles

What do u mean personals I don't realize lol

Like his concepts were creative

They are not.

Dude he said nig pen I'd the name of the cage I'm locked in under the dining table

That's incredibly corny

Dude is not a good writer

At all lmao

Destroyer · 06-14-2015, 05:47 PM

that opener would have slayed your entire verse filled with movie references from 1996

Junto · 06-14-2015, 05:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bags

LMFAO this butt hurt faggot is back after a 4 day hiatus an deleting every post he posted then quitting nbl!?

Lol

I'm glad u overcame that breakdown. Emotional fuckin loser lol.

you're right Bags...

I'm a little insane. But u don't know what's in my head u fool I'm dangerous
I'll tell you eat this gun I'll spare your mother... you know... Edible Arrangements

I hear it's beautiful out in Lemoyne this time of year sucka nigga
Maybe I'll take another 4 day vacation

Public Enema · 06-14-2015, 05:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bags

Every1 seen the verse now ?

Ur a lame for real dude.

An only people sayin shits wack in here are butt hurt faggots who mad at me

Lmaaao "the only ppl sayin it's wack"

Lool

Dude YOU MUST REALLY THINK THIS IS GOOD ROFL

06-14-2015, 05:24 PM	#2
Public Enema Detained Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 248 Accomplishments - Lifetime Faggot Award Champed - Jizz Eaters VII - Can't go Night Night - Can't go Night Night 2 Rep Power: 0	Not bad. Some ass bars sprinkled w/ gems Opener was dope af I must admit But no @ nig pen and a cpl others Lol that's pretty bad Otherwise good drop __________________ [CENTER]Ima kamikaze n I'm kinda cuckoo-Chance[/CENTER]

06-14-2015, 05:27 PM	#4
Public Enema Detained Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 248 Accomplishments - Lifetime Faggot Award Champed - Jizz Eaters VII - Can't go Night Night - Can't go Night Night 2 Rep Power: 0	You would have lost I'm kinda mad you didn't keep this Because you aren't that good. Lol tbr Not enough make ups ti make up black cock she sucked! haha boy u ass Cool opener __________________ [CENTER]Ima kamikaze n I'm kinda cuckoo-Chance[/CENTER]

06-14-2015, 05:31 PM	#6
Public Enema Detained Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 248 Accomplishments - Lifetime Faggot Award Champed - Jizz Eaters VII - Can't go Night Night - Can't go Night Night 2 Rep Power: 0	These are all terrible bags He got one foot in the grave. That shits a bad look dog. Good luck trynna lean on him as a father figure wen they cut that fat niggers foot off U too busy writing gunbars to help him, shit is just bogus U Lost ur job n he's gon die cuz the only real shots u dodgin are his insulin doses. An u said ur white mom's a Revlon model. Man that's the stuff! But ain't enuff make ups in the world to take back all them black cocks she sucked Me? I got the winning ticket. ur parents r just cursed... But fuck Mulatto scratch off.... YOUR mother clawed at ur skin in embrassment at birth Darin nigpen jr. Lesson is? muff's name is painful. Fuckin mongrel. They named u nigpen after the cage they kept u in under the table. Shoulda aborted u. Boardin got ur sad ass breaking down But u died inside ages ago cuz wen u went off the deep end the black half of u drowned. He ain't been hungry since b boys. An on rb he's the fagot type. Guess all that jiz he was talm bout eatin off his hand musta curbed his fuckin appetit I'm dodging my dad's insulin doSes Black half drowned? What r u talking about lol Lmao. All of the above is absolute ass The rest is good So 6/20 __________________ [CENTER]Ima kamikaze n I'm kinda cuckoo-Chance[/CENTER] Last edited by Public Enema; 06-14-2015 at 05:37 PM.

06-14-2015, 05:35 PM	#7
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	DEAD @ THOSE FIRST FOUR LINES THO AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

06-14-2015, 05:39 PM	#12
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	The nigpen was personals homeboh prolly dont know about. This shit was killer for realz. I mean make a man hide his head under the blanket and stay put killer. __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

06-14-2015, 05:36 PM	#9
Junto The Founder Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 827 Battle Record: 30-11 Accomplishments - Shadow Pic Roast Champed - Key Grand Prix 3 - NBL Season 8 Rep Power: 11766208	stick to writing about slurpin cock from the 1st person Amen perspective... you excel at that This is garbage

06-14-2015, 05:43 PM	#14
Public Enema Detained Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 248 Accomplishments - Lifetime Faggot Award Champed - Jizz Eaters VII - Can't go Night Night - Can't go Night Night 2 Rep Power: 0	So snoops verse was wack now?/generic Umm his whole verse was chock full of personals U can't cut it. Sorry @Sn00p Take a long look bro lol __________________ [CENTER]Ima kamikaze n I'm kinda cuckoo-Chance[/CENTER]

06-14-2015, 05:44 PM	#15
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Dude.. The shit aint trash though by any means. Im a pretty fair judge of battle bars and persojals.. and this is loaded with personals u mighg not realize. Thats why its not trash. It actually hits pretty hard imo __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

06-14-2015, 05:47 PM	#17
Public Enema Detained Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 248 Accomplishments - Lifetime Faggot Award Champed - Jizz Eaters VII - Can't go Night Night - Can't go Night Night 2 Rep Power: 0	Genocide U have not participated in or voted on any battles What do u mean personals I don't realize lol Like his concepts were creative They are not. Dude he said nig pen I'd the name of the cage I'm locked in under the dining table That's incredibly corny Dude is not a good writer At all lmao __________________ [CENTER]Ima kamikaze n I'm kinda cuckoo-Chance[/CENTER]