06-08-2015, 01:51 PM | #1 |
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eyespaz 2-3 vs Cred 2-2 - CRED WINS
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For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes Good luck! @eyespaz @Cred |
06-09-2015, 09:24 PM | #2 |
Gang shit on my brain
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Just seen this, 10
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06-11-2015, 10:39 AM | #3 |
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06-12-2015, 01:23 PM | #4 |
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Ay.
You ain't a shooter. I thought this loser would try with a gun. So while your arm try angles.. I'll be finessin to choke you out w/one. You suck on RB. And the shit you post here's like a real crime. So that shows in this spot you'll just be left tryin to fit in.. yield sign. My chain hang low. Girls think your a shrimp and a fuckin hoto. So when your bitch want that horseback it won't just be my shirt w/ the Polo logo. U a player tho? My girl a ho fo sho but I don't give warnings. So go mountain dew her.. bc ur blood'll be splattered in that by morning. You won't ever be good. I wish you would but you won't whore. So dont get caught holding your breath faggot.. just die off that diving board. @Cred
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06-13-2015, 12:18 AM | #5 |
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Check itt..
Dis total devastation, 9 mil lift his soul & heavens waitin Try me and that fukin arm'll Pop like shoulder separation A Butcher wit dat machete, chopem up til his pics look blurred in da face I'll do'em Deli style.. u'd think I was guarding Stephen Curry on da break I rhyme makin hits.. I keep it Koo, u spittin all lies on ya shit Cuz if eyespaz on da track.. I'd have to b a homosexual & sound like a bitch So fuk u & ur lil ass gun.. I suggest u squeeze tighter dude Cuz I'll bring dat Tekken, dat'll put u in da air higher den a Street Fighter move Plus ur girls a slut but u love her, ill kill u both to make troubles worser & dat'll crush ur Bond.. while ill make mine, after they try n lock me for double murder |
06-13-2015, 12:47 AM | #6 | ||
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06-13-2015, 10:18 AM | #7 |
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You ain't a shooter. I thought this loser would try with a gun.
So while your arm try angles.. I'll be finessin to choke you out w/one. kinda forced, decent tho You suck on RB. And the shit you post here's like a real crime. So that shows in this spot you'll just be left tryin to fit in.. yield sign. nah lol My chain hang low. Girls think your a shrimp and a fuckin hoto. So when your bitch want that horseback it won't just be my shirt w/ the Polo logo. again not good here U a player tho? My girl a ho fo sho but I don't give warnings. So go mountain dew her.. bc ur blood'll be splattered in that by morning. dead, i hope this bar gets recognition in the mag for being so played, no offense You won't ever be good. I wish you would but you won't whore. So dont get caught holding your breath faggot.. just die off that diving board. yeah this didnt work either bro Man spaz what happened here? You usually come with some pretty good gunbar shit and overall decent concepts. This is probably the worst ive seen from you tbh.. vs Check itt.. Dis total devastation, 9 mil lift his soul & heavens waitin Try me and that fukin arm'll Pop like shoulder separation basic, wording str8 A Butcher wit dat machete, chopem up til his pics look blurred in da face I'll do'em Deli style.. u'd think I was guarding Stephen Curry on da break alright not bad I rhyme makin hits.. I keep it Koo, u spittin all lies on ya shit Cuz if eyespaz on da track.. I'd have to b a homosexual & sound like a bitch ok but nameplay on him a bit done So fuk u & ur lil ass gun.. I suggest u squeeze tighter dude Cuz I'll bring dat Tekken, dat'll put u in da air higher den a Street Fighter move played yo Plus ur girls a slut but u love her, ill kill u both to make troubles worser & dat'll crush ur Bond.. while ill make mine, after they try n lock me for double murder ehh Cred not the best ive seen from you, idk if its because u saw his verse and thought you didnt need much to beat it, but you had maybe a couple decent lines here, nothing special. But it still takes it. Vote: Cred |
06-13-2015, 04:48 PM | #8 |
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Spaz
Opener almost Yield sign was dope Vs Cred Opener I spaz ok Closer ok I got cred easing his way through this, eyespaz just gotta complete his concepts better although I really liked the yield sign bar but cre had more than enuff to take this, good ish Vote cred |
06-13-2015, 08:13 PM | #9 |
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Eyespaz Ure getting better but not quite yet... The yield sign showed signs but u have to make better sense of ur lines... Like the opener, why would his arm try angles? Not quite yet
Cred, u had enough to get it done, deli was aight, closer was too Vote cred
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06-13-2015, 09:34 PM | #10 |
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My chain hang low. Girls think your a shrimp and a fuckin hoto.
So when your bitch want that horseback it won't just be my shirt w/ the Polo logo. U a player tho? My girl a ho fo sho but I don't give warnings. So go mountain dew her.. bc ur blood'll be splattered in that by morning. Vs Dis total devastation, 9 mil lift his soul & heavens waitin Try me and that fukin arm'll Pop like shoulder separation A Butcher wit dat machete, chopem up til his pics look blurred in da face I'll do'em Deli style.. u'd think I was guarding Stephen Curry on da break tied in quotes but cred had overall better verse V/Cred |
06-14-2015, 09:33 AM | #11 |
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You ain't a shooter. I thought this loser would try with a gun.
So while your arm try angles.. I'll be finessin to choke you out w/one. ^this was kinda all over the place lol. this style is fine, but if u do multiple connections in a bar and don't just focus on one, u have to make sure the connections are strong enough so ppl get them. see neighbor bars for good examples of that You suck on RB. And the shit you post here's like a real crime. So that shows in this spot you'll just be left tryin to fit in.. yield sign. ^this was pretty cool My chain hang low. Girls think your a shrimp and a fuckin hoto. So when your bitch want that horseback it won't just be my shirt w/ the Polo logo. ^i see where u're going w/ this, but u coulda referenced horseback in the setup, so the concept becomes clearer. becuz the idea was pretty nice U a player tho? My girl a ho fo sho but I don't give warnings. So go mountain dew her.. bc ur blood'll be splattered in that by morning. ^mount & do her? u're telling him to fuck ur girl becuz she's a ho? but that's cool cuz u'll kill him & drain his blood into a mountain dew can? idk man. i mean, the wp wasnt bad (ive never seen it), but then the flip was all over the place. maybe try and focus more. have the line be about the wp, the connection and nothing else. You won't ever be good. I wish you would but you won't whore. So dont get caught holding your breath faggot.. just die off that diving board. ^this was decent. the whole holding breath til he's good/diving concept is really good. the flip coulda been better, but this was still solid vs. Dis total devastation, 9 mil lift his soul & heavens waitin Try me and that fukin arm'll Pop like shoulder separation ^aite A Butcher wit dat machete, chopem up til his pics look blurred in da face I'll do'em Deli style.. u'd think I was guarding Stephen Curry on da break ^okay I rhyme makin hits.. I keep it Koo, u spittin all lies on ya shit Cuz if eyespaz on da track.. I'd have to b a homosexual & sound like a bitch ^i think this been done here before, but okay So fuk u & ur lil ass gun.. I suggest u squeeze tighter dude Cuz I'll bring dat Tekken, dat'll put u in da air higher den a Street Fighter move ^never seen the wp. cool Plus ur girls a slut but u love her, ill kill u both to make troubles worser & dat'll crush ur Bond.. while ill make mine, after they try n lock me for double murder ^okay well, cred got this. spaz's flips were too messy. but he's got good ideas. so if he cleans up his bars & makes em more concise, he'll be good. but yea. cred was more consistent and had better wording v/cred |
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