Paradigm 0-0 vs IAmRhetoric 0-0 - PARADIGM WINS

8===D~~~~(}: · 06-13-2015, 11:13 AM

vs

Get Al Sharp'd In here, it's civil rights news actually
the way they left you unarmed I might get blamed for police brutality
ehh decent at best, pretty played
Might've wrote his best now watch'em choke to death
this Dub locked down better than the defense of Dellavedova Steph
wording, decent attempt
Styles been awk, beaten till those rhymes end, stop
& leave a Redder Ric Flair screaming with out the knifes edge chop (WOO!)
nah lol
Dragonglass left behind, scars on both of his wrists
that HardHome lifes coming back to haunt you not John Snow on his ship
nah
Guns im shootin put smog over ya city, make a quake sound
the barrels you hold dwarfs in comparison & are smuggled into Lake Town
ehh
NC Veteran, Longbar Legend so you know he's gonna die
Every punch leaves Rhet In A fucked up situation, worse than Beyonds Eye
concept played and u could have worded it better for a better outcome
Perform dark rituals in a black mask wit a massive cup
Your serious Issues with Magic need to be addressed... NOT the ones bought off Bags & Hush
nah

I came in this battle expecting Para to get the easy win here, ive seen him drop really good in the past and i didnt think rhetoric could hang..what this all turned out to be was both battlers dropped some pretty bad material. Rethoric had some humor in his verse but everything was worded pretty awkward, you gotta find a way to tie everything in better yo. Para had a lot of played stuff and wording seemed to be an issue on most of his bars too. I'm actually gonna vote on who had the better concepts overall because nothing really stood out from either verse. So in that case im going with Rhetoric.

Vote: IanRethroic

06-13-2015, 11:13 AM	#10
8===D~~~~(}: Banned Join Date: Mar 2015 Posts: 1,335 Battle Record: 0-1000 Champed - Mustache C-C-Combo Breaker - No Man Cleft Behind (x79) - Clefts & Rights II - Grand Cleft Larceny - Cleft 4 Dead V Rep Power: 0	vs Get Al Sharp'd In here, it's civil rights news actually the way they left you unarmed I might get blamed for police brutality ehh decent at best, pretty played Might've wrote his best now watch'em choke to death this Dub locked down better than the defense of Dellavedova Steph wording, decent attempt Styles been awk, beaten till those rhymes end, stop & leave a Redder Ric Flair screaming with out the knifes edge chop (WOO!) nah lol Dragonglass left behind, scars on both of his wrists that HardHome lifes coming back to haunt you not John Snow on his ship nah Guns im shootin put smog over ya city, make a quake sound the barrels you hold dwarfs in comparison & are smuggled into Lake Town ehh NC Veteran, Longbar Legend so you know he's gonna die Every punch leaves Rhet In A fucked up situation, worse than Beyonds Eye concept played and u could have worded it better for a better outcome Perform dark rituals in a black mask wit a massive cup Your serious Issues with Magic need to be addressed... NOT the ones bought off Bags & Hush nah I came in this battle expecting Para to get the easy win here, ive seen him drop really good in the past and i didnt think rhetoric could hang..what this all turned out to be was both battlers dropped some pretty bad material. Rethoric had some humor in his verse but everything was worded pretty awkward, you gotta find a way to tie everything in better yo. Para had a lot of played stuff and wording seemed to be an issue on most of his bars too. I'm actually gonna vote on who had the better concepts overall because nothing really stood out from either verse. So in that case im going with Rhetoric. Vote: IanRethroic