eyespaz 2-3 vs Cred 2-2 - CRED WINS

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Netcees Battle League Season VIII

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Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, June 11th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
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• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
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First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@eyespaz @Cred

[iSpaz]

Just seen this, 10

[Cred]

Cash.

Need the ext though.

[iSpaz]

Ay.


You ain't a shooter. I thought this loser would try with a gun.
So while your arm try angles.. I'll be finessin to choke you out w/one.
You suck on RB. And the shit you post here's like a real crime.
So that shows in this spot you'll just be left tryin to fit in.. yield sign.
My chain hang low. Girls think your a shrimp and a fuckin hoto.
So when your bitch want that horseback it won't just be my shirt w/ the Polo logo.
U a player tho? My girl a ho fo sho but I don't give warnings.
So go mountain dew her.. bc ur blood'll be splattered in that by morning.
You won't ever be good. I wish you would but you won't whore.
So dont get caught holding your breath faggot.. just die off that diving board.

@Cred

[Cred]

Check itt..
Dis total devastation, 9 mil lift his soul & heavens waitin
Try me and that fukin arm'll Pop like shoulder separation
A Butcher wit dat machete, chopem up til his pics look blurred in da face
I'll do'em Deli style.. u'd think I was guarding Stephen Curry on da break
I rhyme makin hits.. I keep it Koo, u spittin all lies on ya shit
Cuz if eyespaz on da track.. I'd have to b a homosexual & sound like a bitch
So fuk u & ur lil ass gun.. I suggest u squeeze tighter dude
Cuz I'll bring dat Tekken, dat'll put u in da air higher den a Street Fighter move
Plus ur girls a slut but u love her, ill kill u both to make troubles worser
& dat'll crush ur Bond.. while ill make mine, after they try n lock me for double murder

[Paradigm]

Originally Posted by eyespaz

You ain't a shooter. I thought this loser would try with a gun.
So while your arm try angles.. I'll be finessin to choke you out w/one.
arm try angles doesnt work otherwise this was cool
You suck on RB. And the shit you post here's like a real crime.
So that shows in this spot you'll just be left tryin to fit in.. yield sign.
i dont get this tbh
My chain hang low. Girls think your a shrimp and a fuckin hoto.
So when your bitch want that horseback it won't just be my shirt w/ the Polo logo.
nah weak. weak connection and doesnt hit really
U a player tho? My girl a ho fo sho but I don't give warnings.
So go mountain dew her.. bc ur blood'll be splattered in that by morning.
did you just do a mountain dew bar lol... ... .. .
You won't ever be good. I wish you would but you won't whore.
So dont get caught holding your breath faggot.. just die off that diving board.
no connection you gotta tie in the concept and connect it somehow

@Cred

Originally Posted by Cred

Check itt..
Dis total devastation, 9 mil lift his soul & heavens waitin
Try me and that fukin arm'll Pop like shoulder separation
lazy concept
A Butcher wit dat machete, chopem up til his pics look blurred in da face
I'll do'em Deli style.. u'd think I was guarding Stephen Curry on da break
ok needs a better setup tho
I rhyme makin hits.. I keep it Koo, u spittin all lies on ya shit
Cuz if eyespaz on da track.. I'd have to b a homosexual & sound like a bitch
LOL good lotb
So fuk u & ur lil ass gun.. I suggest u squeeze tighter dude
Cuz I'll bring dat Tekken, dat'll put u in da air higher den a Street Fighter move
tekken has been done to death and connection to street fighter doesnt fit here
Plus ur girls a slut but u love her, ill kill u both to make troubles worser
& dat'll crush ur Bond.. while ill make mine, after they try n lock me for double murder
to wordy

spaz on the track won this. eye almost had one hit with opener but it doesnt work. cred had a few almosts as well but takes this pretty easily imo.

Vote - Cred

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You ain't a shooter. I thought this loser would try with a gun.
So while your arm try angles.. I'll be finessin to choke you out w/one.
kinda forced, decent tho
You suck on RB. And the shit you post here's like a real crime.
So that shows in this spot you'll just be left tryin to fit in.. yield sign.
nah lol
My chain hang low. Girls think your a shrimp and a fuckin hoto.
So when your bitch want that horseback it won't just be my shirt w/ the Polo logo.
again not good here
U a player tho? My girl a ho fo sho but I don't give warnings.
So go mountain dew her.. bc ur blood'll be splattered in that by morning.
dead, i hope this bar gets recognition in the mag for being so played, no offense
You won't ever be good. I wish you would but you won't whore.
So dont get caught holding your breath faggot.. just die off that diving board.
yeah this didnt work either bro

Man spaz what happened here? You usually come with some pretty good gunbar shit and overall decent concepts. This is probably the worst ive seen from you tbh..


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Check itt..
Dis total devastation, 9 mil lift his soul & heavens waitin
Try me and that fukin arm'll Pop like shoulder separation
basic, wording str8
A Butcher wit dat machete, chopem up til his pics look blurred in da face
I'll do'em Deli style.. u'd think I was guarding Stephen Curry on da break
alright not bad
I rhyme makin hits.. I keep it Koo, u spittin all lies on ya shit
Cuz if eyespaz on da track.. I'd have to b a homosexual & sound like a bitch
ok but nameplay on him a bit done
So fuk u & ur lil ass gun.. I suggest u squeeze tighter dude
Cuz I'll bring dat Tekken, dat'll put u in da air higher den a Street Fighter move
played yo
Plus ur girls a slut but u love her, ill kill u both to make troubles worser
& dat'll crush ur Bond.. while ill make mine, after they try n lock me for double murder
ehh


Cred not the best ive seen from you, idk if its because u saw his verse and thought you didnt need much to beat it, but you had maybe a couple decent lines here, nothing special. But it still takes it.

Vote: Cred

[Bust]

Spaz

Opener almost
Yield sign was dope

Vs


Cred


Opener
I spaz ok
Closer ok

I got cred easing his way through this, eyespaz just gotta complete his concepts better although I really liked the yield sign bar but cre had more than enuff to take this, good ish

Vote cred

[ill nik-A]

Eyespaz Ure getting better but not quite yet... The yield sign showed signs but u have to make better sense of ur lines... Like the opener, why would his arm try angles? Not quite yet

Cred, u had enough to get it done, deli was aight, closer was too

Vote cred

[jilti]

My chain hang low. Girls think your a shrimp and a fuckin hoto.
So when your bitch want that horseback it won't just be my shirt w/ the Polo logo.
U a player tho? My girl a ho fo sho but I don't give warnings.
So go mountain dew her.. bc ur blood'll be splattered in that by morning.

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Dis total devastation, 9 mil lift his soul & heavens waitin
Try me and that fukin arm'll Pop like shoulder separation
A Butcher wit dat machete, chopem up til his pics look blurred in da face
I'll do'em Deli style.. u'd think I was guarding Stephen Curry on da break


tied in quotes but cred had overall better verse
V/Cred

[Sn00p]

You ain't a shooter. I thought this loser would try with a gun.
So while your arm try angles.. I'll be finessin to choke you out w/one.
^this was kinda all over the place lol. this style is fine, but if u do multiple connections in a bar and don't just focus on one, u have to make sure the connections are strong enough so ppl get them. see neighbor bars for good examples of that
You suck on RB. And the shit you post here's like a real crime.
So that shows in this spot you'll just be left tryin to fit in.. yield sign.
^this was pretty cool
My chain hang low. Girls think your a shrimp and a fuckin hoto.
So when your bitch want that horseback it won't just be my shirt w/ the Polo logo.
^i see where u're going w/ this, but u coulda referenced horseback in the setup, so the concept becomes clearer. becuz the idea was pretty nice
U a player tho? My girl a ho fo sho but I don't give warnings.
So go mountain dew her.. bc ur blood'll be splattered in that by morning.
^mount & do her? u're telling him to fuck ur girl becuz she's a ho? but that's cool cuz u'll kill him & drain his blood into a mountain dew can? idk man. i mean, the wp wasnt bad (ive never seen it), but then the flip was all over the place. maybe try and focus more. have the line be about the wp, the connection and nothing else.
You won't ever be good. I wish you would but you won't whore.
So dont get caught holding your breath faggot.. just die off that diving board.
^this was decent. the whole holding breath til he's good/diving concept is really good. the flip coulda been better, but this was still solid

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Dis total devastation, 9 mil lift his soul & heavens waitin
Try me and that fukin arm'll Pop like shoulder separation
^aite
A Butcher wit dat machete, chopem up til his pics look blurred in da face
I'll do'em Deli style.. u'd think I was guarding Stephen Curry on da break
^okay
I rhyme makin hits.. I keep it Koo, u spittin all lies on ya shit
Cuz if eyespaz on da track.. I'd have to b a homosexual & sound like a bitch
^i think this been done here before, but okay
So fuk u & ur lil ass gun.. I suggest u squeeze tighter dude
Cuz I'll bring dat Tekken, dat'll put u in da air higher den a Street Fighter move
^never seen the wp. cool
Plus ur girls a slut but u love her, ill kill u both to make troubles worser
& dat'll crush ur Bond.. while ill make mine, after they try n lock me for double murder
^okay

well, cred got this. spaz's flips were too messy. but he's got good ideas. so if he cleans up his bars & makes em more concise, he'll be good. but yea. cred was more consistent and had better wording
v/cred

[Hush]

Originally Posted by eyespaz

Ay.


You ain't a shooter. I thought this loser would try with a gun.
So while your arm try angles.. I'll be finessin to choke you out w/one.
not feeling this.. when his arm try angles? bro ive never heard anyone say that ever. it dont mean anything. I get what a arm triangle choke is. but it dont work the other way so I really dislike this line
You suck on RB. And the shit you post here's like a real crime.
So that shows in this spot you'll just be left tryin to fit in.. yield sign.
eh. it was ok but the way it was worded was ass..its like saying u try to fit in like merging traffic. which is wack. but a better way to word it
My chain hang low. Girls think your a shrimp and a fuckin hoto.
So when your bitch want that horseback it won't just be my shirt w/ the Polo logo.
the fuck is a hoto? oh niggas just making words up now? auto loss
U a player tho? My girl a ho fo sho but I don't give warnings.
So go mountain dew her.. bc ur blood'll be splattered in that by morning.
You won't ever be good. I wish you would but you won't whore.
So dont get caught holding your breath faggot.. just die off that diving board.

@Cred

Originally Posted by Cred

Check itt..
Dis total devastation, 9 mil lift his soul & heavens waitin
Try me and that fukin arm'll Pop like shoulder separation
fire
A Butcher wit dat machete, chopem up til his pics look blurred in da face
I'll do'em Deli style.. u'd think I was guarding Stephen Curry on da break
eh
I rhyme makin hits.. I keep it Koo, u spittin all lies on ya shit
Cuz if eyespaz on da track.. I'd have to b a homosexual & sound like a bitch
fire
So fuk u & ur lil ass gun.. I suggest u squeeze tighter dude
Cuz I'll bring dat Tekken, dat'll put u in da air higher den a Street Fighter move
eh
Plus ur girls a slut but u love her, ill kill u both to make troubles worser
& dat'll crush ur Bond.. while ill make mine, after they try n lock me for double murder
ok

vote for cred

other guy was off