R. 2: Genocide vs. mayniuhh - (Genocide wins)

[Razah]

Okay so, I read mayniuhh's verse and it read to me like a spoken word piece, which I'm cool with. Buuttt, whenever I hear a spoken word piece, I expect for it to be deep, or have some lines in there that make me be like, Damn, I should've thought of that. The reason I expect so much from a piece written like that is because I feel like they're sacrificing flow/rhyming for what should be a well written verse.

I felt like your verse was, okay. I dunno what else to say, I just thought it was decent.

Genocide, your verse was pretty dope to me. I liked the wording of it, the flow that I got from it, and the way you switched up some rhymes schemes here & there was refreshing. This part was sick to me, good shit.

have you ever danced, with the devil, or sold your soul
gazed in a mirror at yourself, saw theres nothing to behold
a shell of a man staring back, these are days to come
when the mayan dressed in black, leaves his grave, from the dust
escaping the netherlands, headband, feathered wrap
tethered to his forehead, mortal flesh never lasts
volcanic ash, splashed, shmears this person like war paint
point blank, the tomahawk swords range, ensures pain
a warrior of worldly fates, who tore down the pearly gates
curly hair, trails behind his furious rage, furry, unscathed
he bathes, in the dna's, of catholics and christians
and casts shit and excrement, he spits, in the caskets of victims

vGenocide