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Old 06-07-2015, 11:07 AM   #9
fraze
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Originally Posted by Destroyer View Post
beating me? that's fiction. I seen his bars & this kid's dumb
only flip u got that works is the phone that u can't post a pic from
cool tie in. nice wording on this
treat ur ho better, man, cuz u act like she's a sex slave
both me & her said 'jil let me' when referring to her fresh shave
concept is ok, but didn't like the flip
I left that bitch bloody too...blonde on the edge of the futon
des might not ice ti, but I guarantee that he will be saying 'ooh long'
creative concept, but doesn't hit to me as written
looks like pimpken is back, so please just try to be dope
cause if Kyrie ur weak shots u cavaliers lookin white as a ghost
cool concept bad wording
stop that garden shit faggot, planting roses gets u no head
cuz ur five or six weeks into flowering... no Eddie the Munster grow thread
this is ok
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Originally Posted by jilti View Post
bout time u stop taking it lying down. guys pound in exchange for rent
gettin that Belly Up Business so often could file chapter 11 w/o any debt
nice concept but this is worded awkward to me. set up keeps this from being a miss
def not a threat. toss him like a nerf ball w/perfect shaped spirals
we'll see D get thrown out the window this week like the nba finals
sick. but would have liked a more related setup
cant get a dime yo. small dick makes girls hall quick when he pursues
believe its true. soon as he Takes Off speedos, that's the same thing females do
didn't like this. forced
proven beast. runnin up on me ends w/ ur entire knee hurting
so go hard in the paint vs a warrior & its season over like Kyrie Irvings
nice. but didn't really need the knee tie in, so could have worded the setup more harshly
got worm ring & many diseases. this flea infested piece of shits a whore
sex partners say "Desiccant until u put medicine on those lacerations & sores"
nah not feeling this. the idea isn't bad, but this feels forced to me
First off props to both of you, this was one of the better battles I've read this week so far. Destro started off strong with the flip phone bar, and ended well with flowering, but missed on execution of some of punches in the middle of the verse. Jilti had some nice lines 'NBA finals', 'season over', but had similar problems with some forced concepts. This badly is pretty close because both showed similar levels of creativity on concepts and quotes are even. really just comes down to who's bars you liked better. In my case that was

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