Fraze 3-1 vs Tic Tac 3-1 - FRAZE WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, June 4th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@fraze @Tic Tac

[fraze]

cheque

[Tic]

I'm going 10 because I'm busy af.

[fraze]

Cool. I'm dropping later today.

[Tic]

May need the ext if that's cool.

[fraze]

sure that's fine with me if the mods are cool with it. my verse is basically done, but I might tweak some stuff.

Edit: sent 12 to sharp, hope that's cool with the ext. @Tic Tac

[Tic]

You’re not cut out for the NBL, you’ll wilt cuz it’s tough fam
If we’re talkin length of stay, you’ll last as long as a Milk Dud in Muff’s hand
Stop lyin. You were never on nc1, you ain’t fuego my friend
Ya style isn’t just old, it’s got Nik in diapers playin with legos again
Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick
Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip

Originally Posted by fraze

No offense Muff, but I don't think you know what you're getting yourself into.

No shows galore, yet mouthin off to Muff? Shit's wack you heathen
How are you Won to talk when you haven’t officially done THAT all season
We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race
Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face
Got a DQ comin to my town, gave my face a grin
No faggot, I'm not talkin about literally the only way you win
@Sharp @fraze

[fraze]

it’s getting gully in the NBL, prepare to pick your casket (pause)
Tic’s into that raw shit too… his hardcore just has more dick-in-ass involved,
fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him,
til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum,
splash zone on this punch? tickets way more than you bargained for,
cause you’re front and center in the worst scalping since the french-indian war,
i’ll leave him spasming in shock, gut shot clutching where the leak is,
then I’ll change tac tics… pistol whip him backwards til he’s twitching paraplegic,
excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment,
is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided,
more violence than lambs killed in silence, if you claiming GOAT bitch,
he’s rated one cut above the rest?... so i’ll shank him then leave his throat slit

[8===D~~~~(}:]

You’re not cut out for the NBL, you’ll wilt cuz it’s tough fam
If we’re talkin length of stay, you’ll last as long as a Milk Dud in Muff’s hand
im sittin here trying to get this but i dnt..
Stop lyin. You were never on nc1, you ain’t fuego my friend
Ya style isn’t just old, it’s got Nik in diapers playin with legos again
bit corny, meh at best
Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick
Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip
ehh decent at best for me
No shows galore, yet mouthin off to Muff? Shit's wack you heathen
How are you Won to talk when you haven’t officially done THAT all season
bleh not feelin
We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race
Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face
good i liked this
Got a DQ comin to my town, gave my face a grin
No faggot, I'm not talkin about literally the only way you win
nah man

vs


it’s getting gully in the NBL, prepare to pick your casket (pause)
Tic’s into that raw shit too… his hardcore just has more dick-in-ass involved,
didnt like the first line, decent at best
fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him,
til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum,
against ur setup was weird, overall decent at best here
splash zone on this punch? tickets way more than you bargained for,
cause you’re front and center in the worst scalping since the french-indian war,
nah not feelin
i’ll leave him spasming in shock, gut shot clutching where the leak is,
then I’ll change tac tics… pistol whip him backwards til he’s twitching paraplegic,
nah
excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment,
is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided,
ok pretty cool, havent seen this wp used on him
more violence than lambs killed in silence, if you claiming GOAT bitch,
he’s rated one cut above the rest?... so i’ll shank him then leave his throat slit
coulda been much better, decent at best

Wow im very surprised at this battle. Idk if Tic rushed or if he just had an off week but normally i see him come a lot doper than this, i only have him with 1 good line in his verse. That being said, it didnt really take much for Fraze to win but he barely even edged it. Fraze you have some ok concepts but ur wording and setups could be better. I have Fraze having 1 good line (less impact than Tics) but also 2 decent ones which is why he wins. Could go either way tho..

Vote: Fraze

[El Muffin]

Tictac

Opener. I love the flow. Humorous bar aight way to start I suppose.
Nika was ok.
top off reminded me of orc. And I'm surprised I never heard of it. That's fresh af.
Won to was a dagger in the sternum.bare mineral was cool
closer eh


Fraze

Lol ur opener was slick. The syllable choice made it stand out to me.
tac tile- I'm thinking kinda played bro. I've seen that concept on him If I'm not mistaken
front and center was an attempt but it fizzled midway through its conception
tac tics. No. Twitching paraplegics? Tac. Tics? Nahhh
death and tac was lotb Tho. I fuck with that
closer was simple word association. cut Above rest/throat slit

Too simple. Use more tie ins



Int erecting battle

tictac flow is high n thigt like a marine crew cut

I see the,work Put in.

Top off
Won to
bare minerals

Vs
Opener
Death by tacs


V/tictac in a surprisingly close one

[john hensley]

Tac

You’re not cut out for the NBL, you’ll wilt cuz it’s tough fam
If we’re talkin length of stay, you’ll last as long as a Milk Dud in Muff’s hand
nahh
Stop lyin. You were never on nc1, you ain’t fuego my friend
Ya style isn’t just old, it’s got Nik in diapers playin with legos again
not feelin, too simple
Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick
Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip
ok, simple, better wording coulda made it hit harder
No shows galore, yet mouthin off to Muff? Shit's wack you heathen
How are you Won to talk when you haven’t officially done THAT all season
nah, old concept
We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race
Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face
best line so far
Got a DQ comin to my town, gave my face a grin
No faggot, I'm not talkin about literally the only way you win
nah

i've read some of ur other verses recently, thought this one just came off rushed like u didnt have a lot of time to think of concepts. Lots of simple and older ones here. Ur wording was solid tho, and the bare minerals line was nice. More like that woulda helped.

vs


Fraze

it’s getting gully in the NBL, prepare to pick your casket (pause)
Tic’s into that raw shit too… his hardcore just has more dick-in-ass involved,
nahh
fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him,
til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum,
decent, coulda related tactile in the set up to make it better
splash zone on this punch? tickets way more than you bargained for,
cause you’re front and center in the worst scalping since the french-indian war,
nahh
i’ll leave him spasming in shock, gut shot clutching where the leak is,
then I’ll change tac tics… pistol whip him backwards til he’s twitching paraplegic,
aight
excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment,
is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided,
solid, wording coulda been better.
more violence than lambs killed in silence, if you claiming GOAT bitch,
he’s rated one cut above the rest?... so i’ll shank him then leave his throat slit
eh

Ok verse... I thought ur best lines were the 2 nameplays. Rest I wasn't feelin that much, I think your tactile impressions line coulda been good had you related the tactile aspect in the set up more. The wording was just a little off. Death and Taxes line was prob the best one.


I dunno, this is a tough one to vote on. I feel like Tac had the better verse in terms of wording and execution and scheme, but the concepts weren't as creative as Fraze's. Problem with Fraze is the lines lacked execution. To me the best line was the Bare Mineral line by Tac.. and that's what sways it for me.

Vote Tac.. honestly is a toss up tho

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by Tic Tac

You’re not cut out for the NBL, you’ll wilt cuz it’s tough fam
If we’re talkin length of stay, you’ll last as long as a Milk Dud in Muff’s hand
nah
Stop lyin. You were never on nc1, you ain’t fuego my friend
Ya style isn’t just old, it’s got Nik in diapers playin with legos again
not very effective
Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick
Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip
ok
No shows galore, yet mouthin off to Muff? Shit's wack you heathen
How are you Won to talk when you haven’t officially done THAT all season
done in a fresh way. Thought this was pretty cool
We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race
Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face
cool
Got a DQ comin to my town, gave my face a grin
No faggot, I'm not talkin about literally the only way you win
nah
@Sharp @fraze

Vs

Originally Posted by fraze

it’s getting gully in the NBL, prepare to pick your casket (pause)
Tic’s into that raw shit too… his hardcore just has more dick-in-ass involved,
wtf no
fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him,
til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum,
ok cool
splash zone on this punch? tickets way more than you bargained for,
cause you’re front and center in the worst scalping since the french-indian war,
nah
i’ll leave him spasming in shock, gut shot clutching where the leak is,
then I’ll change tac tics… pistol whip him backwards til he’s twitching paraplegic,
nope
excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment,
is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided,
not feeling
more violence than lambs killed in silence, if you claiming GOAT bitch,
he’s rated one cut above the rest?... so i’ll shank him then leave his throat slit
I see the potential in this, coulda been much better though

Tac's taking this for me. Although it wasn't a landslide win I don't think it was as even as people are making out. Tac didn't come at his strongest but still did enough. Fraze.. I don't know it just seems to be wording screwing shit up for him sometimes but wasn't really feeling much of this verse regardless.

V/Tic Tac

[Sharp]

Did this earlier and was basically tied at 2 quotes a piece and had tactile as lotb edging bare minerals. Could go either way tho lol

V/fraze

[jilti]

You’re not cut out for the NBL, you’ll wilt cuz it’s tough fam
If we’re talkin length of stay, you’ll last as long as a Milk Dud in Muff’s hand
ok i guess. Kinda simple
Stop lyin. You were never on nc1, you ain’t fuego my friend
Ya style isn’t just old, it’s got Nik in diapers playin with legos again
same as opener, kinda simple
Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick
Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip
blah ok at best
No shows galore, yet mouthin off to Muff? Shit's wack you heathen
How are you Won to talk when you haven’t officially done THAT all season
blah
We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race
Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face
lol
Got a DQ comin to my town, gave my face a grin
No faggot, I'm not talkin about literally the only way you win
simple again


Vs.


it’s getting gully in the NBL, prepare to pick your casket (pause)
Tic’s into that raw shit too… his hardcore just has more dick-in-ass involved,
lol
fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him,
til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum,
not really
splash zone on this punch? tickets way more than you bargained for,
cause you’re front and center in the worst scalping since the french-indian war,
liked the tick-its/scalping tie in
i’ll leave him spasming in shock, gut shot clutching where the leak is,
then I’ll change tac tics… pistol whip him backwards til he’s twitching paraplegic,
cool
excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment,
is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided,
tax punches are played to death on tic but i liked the wording between death and tac's is
more violence than lambs killed in silence, if you claiming GOAT bitch,
he’s rated one cut above the rest?... so i’ll shank him then leave his throat slit
bad closer. i was gonna vote for u based on harder hitting punches until this line


Got tic tac here, even tho i felt like giving it to fraze

[IAmRhetoric]

You’re not cut out for the NBL, you’ll wilt cuz it’s tough fam
If we’re talkin length of stay, you’ll last as long as a Milk Dud in Muff’s hand
lol tru that nigga scarf food

Stop lyin. You were never on nc1, you ain’t fuego my friend
Ya style isn’t just old, it’s got Nik in diapers playin with legos again
meh/
Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick
Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip
okay

No shows galore, yet mouthin off to Muff? Shit's wack you heathen
How are you Won to talk when you haven’t officially done THAT all season
okay

We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race
Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face
i like that

Got a DQ comin to my town, gave my face a grin
No faggot, I'm not talkin about literally the only way you win
lmao

fraze

it’s getting gully in the NBL, prepare to pick your casket (pause)
Tic’s into that raw shit too… his hardcore just has more dick-in-ass involved,
okay

fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him,
til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum,
dope

splash zone on this punch? tickets way more than you bargained for,
cause you’re front and center in the worst scalping since the french-indian war,
wack..

i’ll leave him spasming in shock, gut shot clutching where the leak is,
then I’ll change tac tics… pistol whip him backwards til he’s twitching paraplegic,
filler bar.

excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment,
is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided,
dope

more violence than lambs killed in silence, if you claiming GOAT bitch,
he’s rated one cut above the rest?... so i’ll shank him then leave his throat slit
meh

v/ Fraze just had more quotables for me. I think Tic had more consistency but the quotes outweighed the consistent jabs/misses

[Destroyer]

I have fraze here
wasn't feeling much at all from tic this week, no hate
dug the tac tile punch, scalping punch... death & taxes was good too

v/fraze

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick
Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip
- slick, but have seen these flipped A LOT in my day.
We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race
Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face
- this was solid.

vs

fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him,
til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum
- dope.
excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment,
is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided
- had mad potential. could have been crazy but was mild, as is.

OVERALL: Close one here. I think Tic underestimated his opponent and/or couldn't dig anything up to use against him. Fraze tac tile bar was dope, I liked it. Clean wording w/ a nice harsh execution. Other one I quoted was a nice concept, as well all thou I feel you could have been a little more creative and harsh with it. Kind of left the execution to open. Tic's top off bar was worded nicely, but have seen a lot of those flipped in many ways all involving the dome/gas fill up concept. Bare minerals was nice, tho. Tac tile was LOTB for me, so I'm give it to him...

fraze got it

[Allen Knight]

Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick
Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip
We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race
Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face

Vs

fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him,
til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum,
excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment,
is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided,


V/tic, this was dumb close had to re read, fraze really stepped his shit up, this was
way better then any verse he ever dropped, i only quoted the dopest shit, there was
alot of solid lines from both...i think tic had lotb & wins imo, could go either way, props to both.

[Sharp]

5-5

might have to go next vote wins @Unfukwitable @Orc @Cred

[Orc]

Ya girl tops me off good, a damn skank but she knows dick
Dog. She wouldn’t top you off fillin ya gas tank for a road trip
^light but smooth
We're all made up of stardust, fgt, what a dubious race
Want proof? I'll beat you down to the Bare Minerals you use on ya face

^ set up coulda been better


fraze

fraze in the kitchen with his foot… stomping out the soul from him,
til i leave ‘tac tile impressions’... from the force of his face hitting linoleum,

^ sick
excuse me if i’m being morbid, but the source of my enjoyment,
is ‘death and tac’s is’ guaranteed... certain things in life can’t be avoided,
^ concept was nice, wording was garbage


two quoteables each. fraze had the better hits even tho they were both nps. tic didn't bring it like he usually does here

v. fraze

altho using a cut above the rest line in 2015 is disturbing