15. Copypat vs. MMLP - (Copypat wins)

UnbornBuddha · 06-04-2015, 01:09 AM

Copypat: Humorous, at first I didn't understand since I don't really go into the discussion forum unless sometimes catches my eye. So, I figured it was something, in which Dancake was the fulcrum of the joke. To get this verse, one had to read the thread, as for its relation to the picture, I do see in a bizarre way the connection. Although, it wasn't particularly you at your best, it was still a humorous approach. Funny, but the rhyming was definitely tone down, at least compared to what I'm used to seeing from you.

MMLP: I thought the idea was much better than Pat's, but more serious obviously. However, I do feel you weren't in the momentum as you executed it. It could have been much more stronger given the substantiality of your idea, which would have required more time in. It could have been an epic, a Brobdingnagian display. But, it wasn't. However, you did come in later, so it's understandable.

Vote: Copypat

06-04-2015, 01:09 AM	#7
UnbornBuddha Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,008 Battle Record: 23-10 Champed - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 5 Rep Power: 23856379	Copypat: Humorous, at first I didn't understand since I don't really go into the discussion forum unless sometimes catches my eye. So, I figured it was something, in which Dancake was the fulcrum of the joke. To get this verse, one had to read the thread, as for its relation to the picture, I do see in a bizarre way the connection. Although, it wasn't particularly you at your best, it was still a humorous approach. Funny, but the rhyming was definitely tone down, at least compared to what I'm used to seeing from you. MMLP: I thought the idea was much better than Pat's, but more serious obviously. However, I do feel you weren't in the momentum as you executed it. It could have been much more stronger given the substantiality of your idea, which would have required more time in. It could have been an epic, a Brobdingnagian display. But, it wasn't. However, you did come in later, so it's understandable. Vote: Copypat