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The Clown Prince
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This was pretty legit for a warm up verse. I enjoy dedicated Geno
I'm sure you became aware of who you were up against and wrote a more fitting piece as for this the flow from the beginning is on some classic Geno shit the way you grasp onto the concept was interesting at first but after the second verse I felt it detoured and went off track that's a personal opinion of course. either way nice work my dude.
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