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Old 04-19-2013, 02:45 PM   #3
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Rottweilers are the Shook One's that Mobb Deep was referring to.

Now to the feed lol. Very good piece here JW. Seriously. Great sorta autobiographical story of yourself that paints the picture of who you are, well maybe not who you are but what the actions of your life made you become. Beautifully written.

i've always seen my hope slowly diminish, so corrosive; acidic.
^^Loved this line.
You're coming into your style very well and I think most people would agree with me. Your voice is there and the emotion comes from that when you're honest with yourself and true to your style. Beautiful piece imo. Keep droppin em man.
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