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05-26-2015, 09:12 AM
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The Clown Prince
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Hmmm..the thought of this piece is very smooth
a very great short story coming from you Zen..this deserves more love I thought the consistency of the story was great the interaction was weaved together perfectly the transition kept the pace moving along as well. some great work here my dude, nothing to really nitpick about ha..
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