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Join Date: Dec 2009
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you posting here is lambs to wolves…. of course Some maulin is in order Raz ain’t getting feed to save his life like kids inside that country's borders.. ^some maulin/somalia or even somalian (which is neither the name of the country nor of its inhabitants) doesnt work for me at all. which is a shame, cuz it would'a been a rly direct personal hit w/ wp. but yea. too stretched concepts so transparent... even Lama couldn’t find a quotable, you dropped zero bars… Non didn’t no show... he just never noticed you ^aaaite. it's a personal, but not hard-hitting faggot thought he could contend, pass me then test to best the King, Razah back with a chance at the title? … pshhht…. not even in the SEC, ^aite i’m a hard act to follow… he’d need mod powers to censor ether, he should know he can’t cut it... guess razah isn’t that Sharp either… ^dece, but sharp wp is pretty played at this point. and this isn't even that direct. but yea, kinda okay ….is there even a point in me coming with a closer… i don’t know… can’t decide, guess i’ll leave it to the voters... ^nah. don't like this kinda line. vs. All day I bury fags that carry bags- Your grave is near When everybody says Frasier' gay we aren't talking 'bout David Pierce ^cool He's a starving artist, caution: To avoid that, look right here He's as hungry as Somalia- Wait, even I know that flip isn't a good idea// ^so yea. apparently flipping isn't against this league's rules. but it's still not cool. the bar isn't that gd anyways They had you on a pedestal, but everything you say is straight dumb That's the verse you choose to make up, no wonder Mary Kay is bankrupt ^ehhh. pretty basic wp I know that he admires me but I'd hate to belittle this whore - Just admit it, that's why you put my name in the middle of yours// ^this coulda been flipped harder, the concept wasn't that bad tho That's 'bout as gay as it gets, and that's what I call issues Seriously, it's not a poop chute' no more when it can launch missiles ^nah well. seems like neither tried to hard here. fraze dropped the ball w/ his closer. those kinda lines never work, unless ur actually a txt legend w/ godly wording. his opener was too stretched. sec was his best line, the others weren't misses but didn't rly hit either. i think this verse cud'a been much better w/ some more time spent on it. like, there were a lotta concepts that would'a been hard hits if u developed the some more. and just don't use lines like ur closer anymore, pls. raz' opener was nice. lotb for sure. next line wasn't good, and even tho u probably can't be dq'ed for feeding (as it's not in the rules), i rly don't like the feeding nor the concept. then ur next two weren't bad but not rly hits either. closer, i didn't like. so each has one hit, but raz' hit was better & the lotb, so i think i gotta give it to him. would'a liked both to spend some more time on their verses, becuz the basics are def there, so i can see yall dropping something rly gd for sure. anyways, v/raz |
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