Neighbor 0-0 vs Nightmare 0-0 - NEIGHBOR WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, May 14th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Neighbor @Nightmare

[Cred]

Yoo.

[Cred]

First off..

He dnt pose a threat, gun bar king ill leave here wit smokin techs
Cuz ill put arms to ya mid section like we was in high school playin open chest
Lawyers paid - thats no case. Blow his fukin head off, cops got no trace
They'll call me Tim the toolman Taylor how I leave dis Neighbor wit no face
Homie u dnt bang sets or bust guns. Honestly dis dudes not a goon
W/e u throw up..will jus end up on ur bck like a bags thread wen I beat puke outta u
So stop the fake shit. Ur girls a slut by nature n u hate it
Cuz that bitch be going around for no reason like a blank disc
N nigga ive beat the best n we all know dis dudes a hater
Muhfuka wen u on top dis long u have the right to say fuk a Neighbor
@Neighbor

[Neighbor]

First off

I'll leave pinstripe slits across ya jugular; getcha windpipe split
Then put ya slut wife on the midnight shift & charge the mound like an inside pitch
Shots could make a semi flip.. I break jaws, you ain't callin my bluff
Ya bae's in contention to get Brady suspended the way she drains balls in the clutch
I'm a contract killer; you signed the dotted line, it's over & done with
So this 'Mare don't carry out full-terms, it's only right I put a Colt in his stomach
Getcha spine racked, actin all brash.. you even try that, gats get drawn
Use ya mom's drywall to chalk line y'all & watch Nightfall like Isaac Asimov
You be a dying afterthought.. leave you on dry ice if you gamble w/ me
Advanced Warfare guns - Borgata chip in his palm that'll end Nightlife in Atlantic City

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Nightmare

First off..

He dnt pose a threat, gun bar king ill leave here wit smokin techs
Cuz ill put arms to ya mid section like we was in high school playin open chest
Straight. Nostalgia bar.
Lawyers paid - thats no case. Blow his fukin head off, cops got no trace
They'll call me Tim the toolman Taylor how I leave dis Neighbor wit no face
This would have been a dope bar in 98. In 2015 its like a 6.
Homie u dnt bang sets or bust guns. Honestly dis dudes not a goon
W/e u throw up..will jus end up on ur bck like a bags thread wen I beat puke outta u
Not bad. But you mangled the fuck out of the wording on the closer.
So stop the fake shit. Ur girls a slut by nature n u hate it
Cuz that bitch be going around for no reason like a blank disc
Like the concept, but hit comes off a little simple as worded.
N nigga ive beat the best n we all know dis dudes a hater
Muhfuka wen u on top dis long u have the right to say fuk a Neighbor
Throwaway swag bar.

Originally Posted by Neighbor

I'll leave pinstripe slits across ya jugular; getcha windpipe split
Then put ya slut wife on the midnight shift & charge the mound like an inside pitch
This was cool. 'Charge the mound' is slightly forced but not bad.
Shots could make a semi flip.. I break jaws, you ain't callin my bluff
Ya bae's in contention to get Brady suspended the way she drains balls in the clutch
Nice current events flip.
I'm a contract killer; you signed the dotted line, it's over & done with
So this 'Mare don't carry out full-terms, it's only right I put a Colt in his stomach
Not bad. But gunplay is a little boring.
Getcha spine racked, actin all brash.. you even try that, gats get drawn
Use ya mom's drywall to chalk line y'all & watch Nightfall like Isaac Asimov
Huge Isaac Asimov fan. Not such much a fan of this bar.
You be a dying afterthought.. leave you on dry ice if you gamble w/ me
Advanced Warfare guns - Borgata chip in his palm that'll end Nightlife in Atlantic City
This is cool and works with a little force

Nightmare seems like he knows what he's doing but was probably rusty or unmotivated. He had 4/5 decent bars but nothing that was amazing. Nothing that was horrible, but nothing I particularly liked.

Neighbor also has 4/5 solid bars, and his miss isn't as bad as Nightmare's. He has better concepts in general, but some of them used slightly forced wordplay to get across. But over all a pretty good verse.

Vote: Neighbor - this was a closer battle than I thought it would be but Neighbor dropped a stronger verse.

[Sharp]

He dnt pose a threat, gun bar king ill leave here wit smokin techs
Cuz ill put arms to ya mid section like we was in high school playin open chest
ok
Lawyers paid - thats no case. Blow his fukin head off, cops got no trace
They'll call me Tim the toolman Taylor how I leave dis Neighbor wit no face
really basic neighbor flip with a cool bit of originality
Homie u dnt bang sets or bust guns. Honestly dis dudes not a goon
W/e u throw up..will jus end up on ur bck like a bags thread wen I beat puke outta u
coulda been so Dope but wording was bad
So stop the fake shit. Ur girls a slut by nature n u hate it
Cuz that bitch be going around for no reason like a blank disc
cool
N nigga ive beat the best n we all know dis dudes a hater
Muhfuka wen u on top dis long u have the right to say fuk a Neighbor
nah





I'll leave pinstripe slits across ya jugular; getcha windpipe split
Then put ya slut wife on the midnight shift & charge the mound like an inside pitch
nice
Shots could make a semi flip.. I break jaws, you ain't callin my bluff
Ya bae's in contention to get Brady suspended the way she drains balls in the clutch
I like the Brady tie in but it's still a balls flip that you can see coming
I'm a contract killer; you signed the dotted line, it's over & done with
So this 'Mare don't carry out full-terms, it's only right I put a Colt in his stomach
solid
Getcha spine racked, actin all brash.. you even try that, gats get drawn
Use ya mom's drywall to chalk line y'all & watch Nightfall like Isaac Asimov
ok
You be a dying afterthought.. leave you on dry ice if you gamble w/ me
Advanced Warfare guns - Borgata chip in his palm that'll end Nightlife in Atlantic City
ok


I think neigh was more consistent and his opener was lotb. I like creds blank disc line but most neighbor flips are done and the puke bar needed wording help

V/

[Sn00p]

He dnt pose a threat, gun bar king ill leave here wit smokin techs
Cuz ill put arms to ya mid section like we was in high school playin open chest
^aite
Lawyers paid - thats no case. Blow his fukin head off, cops got no trace
They'll call me Tim the toolman Taylor how I leave dis Neighbor wit no face
^seen this too many times unfortunately
Homie u dnt bang sets or bust guns. Honestly dis dudes not a goon
W/e u throw up..will jus end up on ur bck like a bags thread wen I beat puke outta u
^concept cool, flip was off sadly
So stop the fake shit. Ur girls a slut by nature n u hate it
Cuz that bitch be going around for no reason like a blank disc
^aite
N nigga ive beat the best n we all know dis dudes a hater
Muhfuka wen u on top dis long u have the right to say fuk a Neighbor
^seems lazy

vs.

I'll leave pinstripe slits across ya jugular; getcha windpipe split
Then put ya slut wife on the midnight shift & charge the mound like an inside pitch
^dope schemes. decent punch
Shots could make a semi flip.. I break jaws, you ain't callin my bluff
Ya bae's in contention to get Brady suspended the way she drains balls in the clutch
^nice
I'm a contract killer; you signed the dotted line, it's over & done with
So this 'Mare don't carry out full-terms, it's only right I put a Colt in his stomach
^okay
Getcha spine racked, actin all brash.. you even try that, gats get drawn
Use ya mom's drywall to chalk line y'all & watch Nightfall like Isaac Asimov
^not rly a hard-hitting punch
You be a dying afterthought.. leave you on dry ice if you gamble w/ me
Advanced Warfare guns - Borgata chip in his palm that'll end Nightlife in Atlantic City
^aite, cool

neigh was more consistent. cred wasn't bad, but he had some stuff i've seen before that i didn't feel cuz of the fact. also, neigh had great rhyme schemes and nice wording. that made his drop much smoother. cool little battle, props to both. but i got neigh
v/neigh

[Junto]

This was pretty good. Two different styles but both had some solid hits...

Lawyers paid - thats no case. Blow his fukin head off, cops got no trace
They'll call me Tim the toolman Taylor how I leave dis Neighbor wit no face

vs.

I'll leave pinstripe slits across ya jugular; getcha windpipe split
Then put ya slut wife on the midnight shift & charge the mound like an inside pitch
I'm a contract killer; you signed the dotted line, it's over & done with
So this 'Mare don't carry out full-terms, it's only right I put a Colt in his stomach

People downplayin Tim the toolman line... I've been around... haven't seen that
I thought it was nice. Blank disc was solid too. & the closer wasn't bad to me either.
Neigh's opener was LOTB though, that was dope. Brady balls getting old.
Colt in stomach was tough. & the last 2 weren't real hardhitting but not bad at all tbh.

neighbor got it, consistent verse

V/ Neigh

[jilti]

neighbor had opener & closer, plus nice multi setups.
nightmare had ok concepts with execution to match

Neighbor was more solid and gets my vote

[Tic]

Blank disc

Vs

Opens, colt, Brady was an almost.

Cool battle but I think neighbor took it with consistency and better hits. His wording is on point and it helped.

[Allen Knight]

So stop the fake shit. Ur girls a slut by nature n u hate it
Cuz that bitch be going around for no reason like a blank disc


vs


Getcha spine racked, actin all brash.. you even try that, gats get drawn
Use ya mom's drywall to chalk line y'all & watch Nightfall like Isaac Asimov
You be a dying afterthought.. leave you on dry ice if you gamble w/ me
Advanced Warfare guns - Borgata chip in his palm that'll end Nightlife in Atlantic City


V/Neigh, this coulda been a sick battle if both dropped there best....cuz creds blank disc bar was nice, neighs borgata line was flamess, but cred had to many played neighbor lines like tim the tool man joint was one the first i ever read tbh, i like shit from both but neighbor was a lil more consistent but props to both, lookin forward to seeing verse from yah'll in the future.