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This was a pretty interesting piece altogether.
I like the concept of the idea as it carries out the flow of the piece is smooth and the transitioning is dope I often wonder how long it takes you to construct a verse you seem to have a great grasp on your vocab usage you also set everything up well for the following line which most people have an issue with the verses sound right but the lines are out of order but you handled yourself pretty well on here..nice work breh
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