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05-15-2015, 01:15 PM
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The Clown Prince
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This was a pretty cool piece, the smoothness was off and on.
I enjoyed the beginning up until the smothered part of the segment then it got interesting again until we got to the fifties & hippies for some reason I wanted you to go into a Next Friday rendition either way i thought this was pretty cool compared to what I've read so far some dope work regardless..keep writing my dude
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