Sn00p 1-0 vs Killing Spree 1-0 - SN00P WINS

Razah · 05-10-2015, 04:48 PM

rapist & murderer that follows kids. otherwise this fag's soft
it's no fairytale when the boy's beans stalks get axed after they have Jack off

To me, this was probably your best line. The wording was weird on it though, it was difficult to read. Also, your closer didn't rhyme to me at all, that threw me off.

Ya moms corpse laid out is foreplay now - this wen I'm scarier
...finger that dead bitch
Then slap ya wit period blood on my hand before they burry her

That's sick. Not sick as in dope, as in, seek help bruh. Anyways, the verse was okay, they were all jabs, but constant.

Overall, I think KS had a more consistent verse. Snoop's verse is kind of choppy as far as the wording goes, doesn't come off as smooth. So my vote goes to Killing Spree

05-10-2015, 04:48 PM	#1
Razah rockkFresh Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: Chicago. Posts: 1,088 Battle Record: 8-10 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 11328545	rapist & murderer that follows kids. otherwise this fag's soft it's no fairytale when the boy's beans stalks get axed after they have Jack off To me, this was probably your best line. The wording was weird on it though, it was difficult to read. Also, your closer didn't rhyme to me at all, that threw me off. Ya moms corpse laid out is foreplay now - this wen I'm scarier ...finger that dead bitch Then slap ya wit period blood on my hand before they burry her That's sick. Not sick as in dope, as in, seek help bruh. Anyways, the verse was okay, they were all jabs, but constant. Overall, I think KS had a more consistent verse. Snoop's verse is kind of choppy as far as the wording goes, doesn't come off as smooth. So my vote goes to Killing Spree