jilti 3-1 vs Drencrom Muff 1-1 - JILTI WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, May 7th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@jilti @Drencrom

[El Muffin]

And so kiddies

Death for all

Right right?


RIGHT RIGHT

[jilti]

Originally Posted by Drencrom

And so kiddies

Death for all

Right right?


RIGHT RIGHT

Drencrom talkin kids.. perv calm that shit bout them little tikes
really need 2 Children. besides the couple u snatched off hello kitty bikes
got smacked silly by Sharp last week, but i'll lay u flat on ya ass
cuz when i let off this round, 9 Handgun feel like a pat on the back
before the boxing match money may had vegas odds on his side
muff felt a slight Man Pac edge going in, but wasn't watching the fight.
he cautiously drives an old pile of junk, six more miles its done
when he goes for a Cartoon up, they crank start it Flintstone style to run
this albino punk is a loner, cuz no girl can stomach the odor
such a foul smell from his Musketeers up even the toughtest of soldiers
boned ur sis while gettin head so intense the wench almost died
said if i want Neck,Collar.. now has to wear one for the rest of her life



12 lines.
@muff @Drencrom

[El Muffin]

ext if poss

If denied, w.e

I havent written anything but like 4 lines for u

Ima get at it asap

[El Muffin]

lol listen allen knights bitch


Last time yall battled


..this vampire conceded defeat quik. Good lord ur a fgt
when night was done u avoided son n lay enclosed in a casket
fkn monster. You pull nothing nigga. Your lies r total
you n ur bitch had a fallout..yet ur the 1 who looks like they survived Chernobyl
I'm the nicest drawn. Incapable of determining between right n wrong
U win? Keep beating that dead horse n you won't be Alive Furlong
Jilti's a fkn lame who sucks w/ broads
Last time he tried to shoot @ a birdie killed her for sayn his Stroke wasn't Up to Par
every verse is played af. You can tell guys horrible
He's just a bitch hallucinating off of rock fumes like Delphi 's oracle
muff'll take ur bitch out for a good time.Black im that impressive
I'll set up a cam n it'll be sex b4 the "fair" like taxi cab confessions
Honestly this dwarfish mutant doesnt foot the bill
Think ur hot but u don't Fahrenheit talent looks or skills


godamnwritersblock

[Sharp]

Drencrom talkin kids.. perv calm that shit bout them little tikes
really need 2 Children. besides the couple u snatched off hello kitty bikes
creative flip. Not the hardest wording tho
got smacked silly by Sharp last week, but i'll lay u flat on ya ass
cuz when i let off this round, 9 Handgun feel like a pat on the back
honestly I've never seen this done on me. works
before the boxing match money may had vegas odds on his side
muff felt a slight Man Pac edge going in, but wasn't watching the fight.
doesn't work too well for me but not a huge miss
he cautiously drives an old pile of junk, six more miles its done
when he goes for a Cartoon up, they crank start it Flintstone style to run
ok
this albino punk is a loner, cuz no girl can stomach the odor
such a foul smell from his Musketeers up even the toughtest of soldiers
ok
boned ur sis while gettin head so intense the wench almost died
said if i want Neck,Collar.. now has to wear one for the rest of her life
not feeling too much




consistent verse. solid. the personal ones were pretty dope



..this vampire conceded defeat quik. Good lord ur a fgt
when night was done u avoided son n lay enclosed in a casket
night/knight's done to death
fkn monster. You pull nothing nigga. Your lies r total
you n ur bitch had a fallout..yet ur the 1 who looks like they survived Chernobyl
alright
I'm the nicest drawn. Incapable of determining between right n wrong
U win? Keep beating that dead horse n you won't be Alive Furlong
ok
Jilti's a fkn lame who sucks w/ broads
Last time he tried to shoot @ a birdie killed her for sayn his Stroke wasn't Up to Par
meh
every verse is played af. You can tell guys horrible
He's just a bitch hallucinating off of rock fumes like Delphi 's oracle
clever. liked it
muff'll take ur bitch out for a good time.Black im that impressive
I'll set up a cam n it'll be sex b4 the "fair" like taxi cab confessions
ok
Honestly this dwarfish mutant doesnt foot the bill
Think ur hot but u don't Fahrenheit talent looks or skills
alright


alright battle

I got jiltis first two bars vs chernobyl and oracle

I liked jil's two better. Muff's generics alright but some have been done n I like jils personals more

V/jil

[Wanderer]

Drencrom talkin kids.. perv calm that shit bout them little tikes
really need 2 Children. besides the couple u snatched off hello kitty bikes
Cool
got smacked silly by Sharp last week, but i'll lay u flat on ya ass
cuz when i let off this round, 9 Handgun feel like a pat on the back
Miss for me
before the boxing match money may had vegas odds on his side
muff felt a slight Man Pac edge going in, but wasn't watching the fight.
This was dope
he cautiously drives an old pile of junk, six more miles its done
when he goes for a Cartoon up, they crank start it Flintstone style to run
Could have been better
this albino punk is a loner, cuz no girl can stomach the odor
such a foul smell from his Musketeers up even the toughtest of soldiers
Pretty cool
boned ur sis while gettin head so intense the wench almost died
said if i want Neck,Collar.. now has to wear one for the rest of her life
Nah

..this vampire conceded defeat quik. Good lord ur a fgt
when night was done u avoided son n lay enclosed in a casket
Blah
fkn monster. You pull nothing nigga. Your lies r total
you n ur bitch had a fallout..yet ur the 1 who looks like they survived Chernobyl
Cool idea with the punch but not feeling the setup with "your lies are total" really funny about small parts that don't make sense
I'm the nicest drawn. Incapable of determining between right n wrong
U win? Keep beating that dead horse n you won't be Alive Furlong
Liked it
Jilti's a fkn lame who sucks w/ broads
Last time he tried to shoot @ a birdie killed her for sayn his Stroke wasn't Up to Par
Nah
every verse is played af. You can tell guys horrible
He's just a bitch hallucinating off of rock fumes like Delphi 's oracle
Nice
muff'll take ur bitch out for a good time.Black im that impressive
I'll set up a cam n it'll be sex b4 the "fair" like taxi cab confessions
What d'you mean by "good time.black I'm that impressive"?
Honestly this dwarfish mutant doesnt foot the bill
Think ur hot but u don't Fahrenheit talent looks or skills
Dug the wordplay

Hmm.. Overall a tough one. In the end it comes down to man pac edge vs Fahrenheit for me. I'm gonna go with Jilti cos overall his wording was less off.

V/Jilti

[Hush]

Originally Posted by jilti

Drencrom talkin kids.. perv calm that shit bout them little tikes
really need 2 Children. besides the couple u snatched off hello kitty bikes
-ok try but wording and execution was shit. Seemed lazy
got smacked silly by Sharp last week, but i'll lay u flat on ya ass
cuz when i let off this round, 9 Handgun feel like a pat on the back
-don't get it. And I'm not stupid so I'll assume it sucks
before the boxing match money may had vegas odds on his side
muff felt a slight Man Pac edge going in, but wasn't watching the fight.
-horrible wording. Lazy. Just not good
he cautiously drives an old pile of junk, six more miles its done
when he goes for a Cartoon up, they crank start it Flintstone style to run
- best one so far. No sting tho
this albino punk is a loner, cuz no girl can stomach the odor
such a foul smell from his Musketeers up even the toughtest of soldiers
- dislike the wp cuz it's forced it don't work both ways. Creative tho
boned ur sis while gettin head so intense the wench almost died
said if i want Neck,Collar.. now has to wear one for the rest of her life
-horribleness. Is English ur second language ? How can u fuck a bitch while getting head tho?



12 lines.
@muff @Drencrom

Originally Posted by Drencrom Muff

lol listen allen knights bitch


Last time yall battled


..this vampire conceded defeat quik. Good lord ur a fgt
when night was done u avoided son n lay enclosed in a casket
-ok
fkn monster. You pull nothing nigga. Your lies r total
you n ur bitch had a fallout..yet ur the 1 who looks like they survived Chernobyl
-why u using 08 lines
I'm the nicest drawn. Incapable of determining between right n wrong
U win? Keep beating that dead horse n you won't be Alive Furlong
- u know this don't make sense bro
Jilti's a fkn lame who sucks w/ broads
Last time he tried to shoot @ a birdie killed her for sayn his Stroke wasn't Up to Par
-lol really bro? Just no
every verse is played af. You can tell guys horrible
He's just a bitch hallucinating off of rock fumes like Delphi 's oracle
- ok cool
muff'll take ur bitch out for a good time.Black im that impressive
I'll set up a cam n it'll be sex b4 the "fair" like taxi cab confessions
-uhh almost. Good wording tho
Honestly this dwarfish mutant doesnt foot the bill
Think ur hot but u don't Fahrenheit talent looks or skills
- makes no sense. Nonsensical wordplay is the new "thing" I see


U both lose


godamnwritersblock

[Razah]

Originally Posted by jilti

Drencrom talkin kids.. perv calm that shit bout them little tikes
really need 2 Children. besides the couple u snatched off hello kitty bikes

he cautiously drives an old pile of junk, six more miles its done
when he goes for a Cartoon up, they crank start it Flintstone style to run@Drencrom

Originally Posted by Drencrom Muff

lol listen allen knights bitch


fkn monster. You pull nothing nigga. Your lies r total
you n ur bitch had a fallout..yet ur the 1 who looks like they survived Chernobyl

Honestly this dwarfish mutant doesnt foot the bill
Think ur hot but u don't Fahrenheit talent looks or skills


godamnwritersblock

So, both had two lines that I liked, so that evens that out. Besides that, I felt like Jilti's other lines were a bit more solid than Muff's.

vJilti

[El Muffin]

yeah I need a break

No inspiration
@Hush

I see why u quit

[Sn00p]

Drencrom talkin kids.. perv calm that shit bout them little tikes
really need 2 Children. besides the couple u snatched off hello kitty bikes
^great wp. execution cuda been harsher (the hello kitty bikes part) but still a hit for me
got smacked silly by Sharp last week, but i'll lay u flat on ya ass
cuz when i let off this round, 9 Handgun feel like a pat on the back
^sharp 9's hand gon' feel? i mean, i see the round, nine, handgun connection, but iono. coulda been clearer with the wording
before the boxing match money may had vegas odds on his side
muff felt a slight Man Pac edge going in, but wasn't watching the fight.
^sliiiightly forced for me, but the wp is fresh, so this was cool to me
he cautiously drives an old pile of junk, six more miles its done
when he goes for a Cartoon up, they crank start it Flintstone style to run
^idk. feels like i seen this before. execution good tho
this albino punk is a loner, cuz no girl can stomach the odor
such a foul smell from his Musketeers up even the toughtest of soldiers
^this connection was too loose. just musketeer/soldier didn't do it. wp was cool, but u coulda done more w/ the concept
boned ur sis while gettin head so intense the wench almost died
said if i want Neck,Collar.. now has to wear one for the rest of her life
^cool

vs

..this vampire conceded defeat quik. Good lord ur a fgt
when night was done u avoided son n lay enclosed in a casket
^not bad
fkn monster. You pull nothing nigga. Your lies r total
you n ur bitch had a fallout..yet ur the 1 who looks like they survived Chernobyl
^feels rly old
I'm the nicest drawn. Incapable of determining between right n wrong
U win? Keep beating that dead horse n you won't be Alive Furlong
^didnt know what a furlong is, thought it was some kinda horse, googled, it's not, so this doesn't rly make sense
Jilti's a fkn lame who sucks w/ broads
Last time he tried to shoot @ a birdie killed her for sayn his Stroke wasn't Up to Par
^i see the connection, but doesn't hit too hard
every verse is played af. You can tell guys horrible
He's just a bitch hallucinating off of rock fumes like Delphi 's oracle
^cool
muff'll take ur bitch out for a good time.Black im that impressive
I'll set up a cam n it'll be sex b4 the "fair" like taxi cab confessions
^not bad
Honestly this dwarfish mutant doesnt foot the bill
Think ur hot but u don't Fahrenheit talent looks or skills
^connection kinda loose. kinda dece still

pretty close. i think muff had like one miss more and that decided it in the end. it's def not as one-sided as the votes make it seem tho. actually enjoyed both verses for the most part. so props for that. but yea, in the end, jil's low points were a bit better.
v/jil

[Sharp]

4-0 jil

ideally close at 5 votes

[Cashius]

Opener, manpac, musketeers

Vs.

Furlong


I thought jilti took this fairly easily. I didn't think muffs verse was terrible. There just weren't a lot of standouts. The golf thing was prolly the only line I hated. Jilti just had more firepower.