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04-17-2013, 06:44 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2013
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i really liked the opening concepts of this verse. very dark. I think it is interesting, when people stop writing league verses but stay motivated to keep writing (or pretend) their style kinda rebounds back to the baseline. but it also changes a little bit every time. as i think ive said before i think its cool how you address people in your writing. good job using clunky words seamlessly in tight clauses. keep writing Dead Man
one day i will copy ur style so completely you combust into purple little flames
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