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04-01-2015, 10:13 AM
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White Earl
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: Philly Cat.
Posts: 12,354
Battle Record: 10-15
Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x)
Champed - Netcees Writers League
- Write Week I
- Write Week 8
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this is what happens when i send Oats a collab verse..
..it ends up being a solo act.
Plainly embarrassed, head palmed, frustrations apparent Staring at passers by, ignoring requests for change they could spare him Another day on the terrace, dirty, sweating, craving surely a beer He wasnt always as fortunate, he used to slave towards his career He made a choice years ago, not to follow the trend Not to bend or conform socially, and picked up the bottle instead Hes met failure, head to head, until it got the best of his pride Hed never accept rejection again, it nestled on the rebel inside Why's a man slide, and slither in failure you ask him? This lifestyle chose him, he simply wears it with fashion Actions he took as a teen, fiend, alcoholic by traits He made his bed, and prepped early to be tossed with the snakes Hated work, earning money, and he aquired the rep Of being in debt, a jobless bum, overslept, with get fired intent I guess some are satisfied, with accomplishing nothing But hell die a happy man, cause he got what was coming
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04-02-2015, 12:42 AM
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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craving surely a beer is awfully worded.
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04-02-2015, 02:40 AM
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Steel Cut
Join Date: May 2013
Posts: 5,084
Battle Record: 19-10
Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x)
Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV
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my bad, man, got caught up with some other shit. I'll send you some rhymes this week
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04-09-2015, 02:27 PM
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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
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After 'He made a choice..' you had me hooked
sounds like it would be a dope audio just need a great beat to go with it.. anyway the flow was pretty great and the delivery felt perfect...nice drop breh
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