My brain hurts

[Geno]

hmm..

i dont know about this topic man.
its been done over and over and over again. to be honest i dont think i ever appreciated any one of the threads ive read similar to this content wise.

the writing is good in spots, awkward in others

example..
I ain't grow up in the hood, so what i lived in the suburbs
I still know some people that get it poppin over one word
To say my life can't be hard cause of color that's absurd

the highlighted area was clean, just thought the opening line could have been reworded better before the comma.
the third line reads really bumpy because of the wording also. this is where im concerned at. if you just would have dropped a word or moved stuff around a little it could have read much cleaner and effortless. that needs work

this goes on in random areas throughout the piece
in an audio track this may not have the same technical issues depending on your pronunciation. just something to consider man.

thanks for posting -stay active, feed... post more work. see you around