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03-25-2015, 01:44 AM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
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The content here was much more straight-forward than other verses I have read from you, which obviously was the point. Some of the phrasing came across as clumsy and broke the linear thought you were driving toward. The rhyming was scattershot. But the moments of unabridged earnestness were appreciated.
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