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03-24-2015, 08:49 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 2,956
Battle Record: 6 - 14
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Gotta agree with Genocide that the last 6 lines were awesome. Top notch.
I could go into detail breaking down into 3 couplets why they are so good, but I think they speak for themselves. It's good in it's entirety. Great multi's&flow. If I had to nitpick one thing it would be the word "protest" (as part of the 3rd of the 3 opening multi's). Even when "properly stressing" it's hard to fit I.M.O. |
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