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I don't even give a fuck, I just need to live it up.
Rhyme disease, I'm sick enough to die from these acidic cuts A dime'll see this dick & suck til her lima bean is drippin stuff Wise & C'll stick the guts. If its nice & clean I'll lick the butt Designer sheets and frilly rugs, it’s finer things that women love That’s why I keep my linens plush, to try and beat my inner thug Her desire leaves my pickle buffed, iron meat to cripple sluts Tigers need some different blood. Ciphen, drink, refill the cup. Ill n such, we sick disgusting. Ghastly gross, we really something! Packin flows that’s filthy trust me the antidotes ain’t killing nothing Cancer grows w/filter sucking. Extract dope, we deal in substance Post traumatic, back at home & still adjusting. Random hoes, milfs & blumpkins Lasses know I’m hip to humpin, Casanova bit ya muffin We have your cake and eat it too, got massive snakes like Beatlejuice From flaccid state the wiener grew, the baddest babes can penis chew I gravitate between a few: acid, yay, weed & shrooms ***tus ate & phoenix flew, with addict rage I fiend the booth Advocate when evil's loose, Atlantis waves on evening news Cannon aimed, the beast is loose, you can’t escape the evil truth Gamma rays defeated you, I’m zappin playa’s. Pikachu Planet shakes when drinking Goose. The flow's rare my pen ooze It blows hair like wind do, the cold air'll get you YOU DON'T KNOW WHERE I'VE BEEN LOU!! CP WW |
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YOU DON'T KNOW WHERE I'VE BEEN LOU!? lol
This was fuckin dope you two. Both of you have damn near the exact same style so there was no stutters here whatsoever. When CP turned it over to WW the song kept rolling, and noone in the audience had any idea. (Two fight club references in one post, I'm going for a record). But there was really nothing negative I could say about this. Humorous in parts and nice vocab, flow, etc. Great piece you two. Whys feed would be appreciated on my piece ZenLand Part II |
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Dug what both of you did technically, flowed perfect and the rhymes were slick. Imagery was effective and funny, Wise was fuckin hilarious and Copy learned me with that pikachu line
Dope drop guys |
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Up?
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lol uppin this sickness
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I enjoyed this both styles compliment each other nicely
makes the whole thing a much more enjoyable read pat came with his own pizzazz while why's took it a step further this was a nice collab the beginning was cool i think the mid section was my fave though..keep it up fellas
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dope dudes
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Yesterday I went up the stairs
I met a man who wasn’t there He wasn’t there again today I wish I wish he’d go away Last edited by Pen Prick; 02-07-2020 at 10:10 PM. |
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Hah, funny lil drop you got here. Enjoyed the set-ups as well. I did that 2 lines each thing with someone a couple years back, shit's cool to do and dope to read. Flowed well throughout. Keep it up.
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I was just about to browse the OM for a CopyPat verse and was stoked to stumble across this. Pat, your style has been amongst my favourite to read since I joined Netcees way back when and this piece was a prime example of why. Whys Ways, you kept pace with Pat in every step and are half the reason this turned out as fresh as it did.
Pat, you down to collab on some shit soon?
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Lol this was dope and very entertaining. Flow was smooth, stacked rhyme schemes, and overall really enjoyable/humorous content. Kinda derailed towards the end IMO, at least in terms of the bangin bitches part. In light of Wise's plumper misadventures surfacing, you guys should follow this up with a fat bitch edition. Dope shit, gentlemen.
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^ I railed the ever living shit outta her face so I wouldn't call it a "misadventure", lol.
Plus she has a cute face and big tits.
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hahahahaha this is disgusting, sick drop
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