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03-13-2015, 09:35 AM
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Allen took this pretty comfortably imho, fresher ideas and execution to the lines, imsoschool has a few diff concepts that maybe could have been something, but his wording really worked against him here. nothing really stood out or hit hard, it just lacked that zinger effect you get off Allen's lines even when his arent such great ideas (Hookah here, for one)
allen trashed him. fuck knows what timeless read? lol
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