Week 9 Chat & Predictions. - Page 18

~RustyGunZ~ · 04-16-2013, 02:32 PM

you do not have to change the league name lmao

i told GOW i was keeping it, if he changes it let me know.

IamBenT · 04-16-2013, 02:51 PM

Zen · 04-16-2013, 03:28 PM

Regardless of the changes to the site we still need votes on the battles in here to keep this shit moving along. Where the fuck are the votes at people

IamBenT · 04-16-2013, 03:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZenLand

Regardless of the changes to the site we still need votes on the battles in here to keep this shit moving along. Where the fuck are the votes at people

No DOUBT!!

Will be voting shortly

Just Write · 04-16-2013, 04:07 PM

so what do i need to work on? cuz im still new to this but i thought my piece was good but apperently not lol.. pointers?

Zen · 04-16-2013, 04:09 PM

From the votes everyone said your piece was good lol. Just keep practicin holmes you've got skill. Just gotta hone in on your voice as a writer

Just Write · 04-16-2013, 04:11 PM

like more narrative? and your piece was dope zen.. for real

Zen · 04-16-2013, 04:14 PM

Appreciate that. And I mean find your voice, like find your style and then run with it. You seem to have all ready have found it now you just need to master it. Like honestly I knew my style was kind of fast rhymin shit like a machine gun or something lol. But I've progressed more in these past few weeks than I ever have before because I've begun adding stories, character development, etc.

Just Write · 04-16-2013, 04:15 PM

gotcha, next week man. good looks

IamBenT · 04-16-2013, 04:41 PM

@TopicalDood5 wow on the whole not betrayed, i feel like an idiot! you sir are a genius lol

Inno · 04-16-2013, 04:47 PM

This is stupid.

Mike Wrecka · 04-16-2013, 04:51 PM

moving the AOWL to a site we control is an option.

Mike Wrecka · 04-16-2013, 04:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Just Write

so what do i need to work on? cuz im still new to this but i thought my piece was good but apperently not lol.. pointers?

never write a verse about love when the topic is atheism. that's my only advice

Zen · 04-16-2013, 04:53 PM

Mike I loved your piece forreal. No hard feelings bud

~RustyGunZ~ · 04-16-2013, 04:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mike Wrecka

moving the AOWL to a site we control is an option.

have fun with that hahah

Mike Wrecka · 04-16-2013, 04:56 PM

lol naaa no hard feelings. im hard headed and sometimes write whatever the fuck i feel like. when i put pen to paper even i don't know what the fuck is gonna appear on the page

Just Write · 04-16-2013, 05:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mike Wrecka

never write a verse about love when the topic is atheism. that's my only advice

lmao.. besides the fact that it wasnt zeroing in on the topic i loved your verse man.. real talk

IamBenT · 04-16-2013, 05:15 PM

Damn dude every battle out here is like so close man. all we need next week is Ink, Adonis and Xces to sign back in and everyone to show and everyone to drop hot fire and vote and holy crap i think the internets will melt down.

Atheist · 04-16-2013, 05:16 PM

Ill vote tomorrow.

Zen · 04-16-2013, 05:21 PM

I just peeped the sign in/out thread and Aesthetic is signin out because he's going to jail lol. Who, when they're about to go to jail, goes to his rap forum and signs out of the league lol

04-16-2013, 02:51 PM	#342
IamBenT SuPreaM Lyricyst Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: San Antonio, TX Posts: 704 Battle Record: 9-6 Rep Power: 412358	__________________ *A.bove T.he R.est* IamBenT\|Genocide\|MikeWrecka\|Objective\|Vulgar\|Witty \|Rawn MacDon

04-16-2013, 04:07 PM	#345
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	so what do i need to work on? cuz im still new to this but i thought my piece was good but apperently not lol.. pointers? __________________

04-16-2013, 04:11 PM	#347
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	like more narrative? and your piece was dope zen.. for real __________________

04-16-2013, 04:15 PM	#349
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	gotcha, next week man. good looks __________________

04-16-2013, 04:41 PM	#350
IamBenT SuPreaM Lyricyst Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: San Antonio, TX Posts: 704 Battle Record: 9-6 Rep Power: 412358	@TopicalDood5 wow on the whole not betrayed, i feel like an idiot! you sir are a genius lol __________________ *A.bove T.he R.est* IamBenT\|Genocide\|MikeWrecka\|Objective\|Vulgar\|Witty \|Rawn MacDon

04-16-2013, 02:32 PM	#341
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,843 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899406	you do not have to change the league name lmao i told GOW i was keeping it, if he changes it let me know.

04-16-2013, 03:28 PM	#343
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Regardless of the changes to the site we still need votes on the battles in here to keep this shit moving along. Where the fuck are the votes at people

04-16-2013, 04:09 PM	#346
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	From the votes everyone said your piece was good lol. Just keep practicin holmes you've got skill. Just gotta hone in on your voice as a writer

04-16-2013, 04:14 PM	#348
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Appreciate that. And I mean find your voice, like find your style and then run with it. You seem to have all ready have found it now you just need to master it. Like honestly I knew my style was kind of fast rhymin shit like a machine gun or something lol. But I've progressed more in these past few weeks than I ever have before because I've begun adding stories, character development, etc.

04-16-2013, 04:47 PM	#351
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,024 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	This is stupid.

04-16-2013, 04:51 PM	#352
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	moving the AOWL to a site we control is an option. __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

04-16-2013, 04:53 PM	#354
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Mike I loved your piece forreal. No hard feelings bud

04-16-2013, 04:56 PM	#356
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	lol naaa no hard feelings. im hard headed and sometimes write whatever the fuck i feel like. when i put pen to paper even i don't know what the fuck is gonna appear on the page __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

04-16-2013, 05:15 PM	#358
IamBenT SuPreaM Lyricyst Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: San Antonio, TX Posts: 704 Battle Record: 9-6 Rep Power: 412358	Damn dude every battle out here is like so close man. all we need next week is Ink, Adonis and Xces to sign back in and everyone to show and everyone to drop hot fire and vote and holy crap i think the internets will melt down. __________________ *A.bove T.he R.est* IamBenT\|Genocide\|MikeWrecka\|Objective\|Vulgar\|Witty \|Rawn MacDon

04-16-2013, 05:16 PM	#359
Atheist Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 292 Battle Record: 4-10 Rep Power: 11913	Ill vote tomorrow.

04-16-2013, 05:21 PM	#360
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	I just peeped the sign in/out thread and Aesthetic is signin out because he's going to jail lol. Who, when they're about to go to jail, goes to his rap forum and signs out of the league lol