Is this Boston or Baghdad?

dead man · 04-16-2013, 04:45 PM

you aint never lying man.. cosigning everything you said here.

i really like reading your more serious verses centered on real events. you have a knack for making it glow under your criticisms and commentary.

angels are watching line was fire. so was the opening bit.

I guess standing in a public place you pay the price
Go from watching the race to watching ppl race to save your life
Pulled a war zone out a marathon
Plant a seed then dare the pawn to share the song
Terror drawn with a pair of bombs
Walked in with a pair of legs, now the pair is gone

i know you stay in oregon but heres hoping you werent personally effected by the bombings. even though from a certain point, it's personal for all of us

stay up jefe.

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04-16-2013, 04:45 PM	#1
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	you aint never lying man.. cosigning everything you said here. i really like reading your more serious verses centered on real events. you have a knack for making it glow under your criticisms and commentary. angels are watching line was fire. so was the opening bit. I guess standing in a public place you pay the price Go from watching the race to watching ppl race to save your life Pulled a war zone out a marathon Plant a seed then dare the pawn to share the song Terror drawn with a pair of bombs Walked in with a pair of legs, now the pair is gone i know you stay in oregon but heres hoping you werent personally effected by the bombings. even though from a certain point, it's personal for all of us stay up jefe. 1 __________________ Zack Wicks for president