AOWL Week 9: TopicalDood5 (3-0) vs. c.d.m. (2-6) [TOPICALDOOD5 WINS, 5-3.]

[IamBenT]

Oh man. I think the worst place to be is having to decide between these two verses.

Topical - Good god man. The beginning was a bit tough to chew. also a few words i would have reworded or done different, ie not betrayed to "unbetrayed". I think because you went with a centered verse it did things to your verse which I wasn't used to seeing and the rhymes were not in expected places. after that though this was straight fire and as the picture of GTA started coming clearer, holy crap man I was laughing and tripping at the fun in this. And probably one of the dopest meta4s of the week was your description of the video game controller! wtf!! the bold part is interesting too, kind of risky because really you could have just gone with the video game adventure and it would have been a strong verse, but i like the risk and it shows the darker side of the wilding out. ending was smart as well.

CDM - holy shit man great verse. starts off a bit slow but in terms of topical rhymes I don't think anyone is doing it better right now, the ending is a real wow type of ending, after really giving us this stellar picture of what sports is all about and like inno says everyone who has ever touched a ball can totally relate. Great stuff.

Damn so close.

Vote -TopicalDood5 i just enjoyed it a bit more, but this is real close cuz cdm dropped stellar. Fantastic battle folks, a must read.