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01-11-2015, 09:09 AM
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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I hate the way you rhyme and internally rhyme. It's like you're confused drunk and the bigger syllabic words are being forced to make you talk with a Boston accent. The message is ok but I feel you don't know how to just talk instead of trying to rhyme badly. The livid as I bawl part was a gem though. Im also assuming you're "gay" now. I quote gay because I didn't know the switching of such biological impetus was possible but I guess maybe you e always been gay. Maybe your bisexuality knows no limits. Maybe you're not even human cause humans show development in writin and this still sucks. Im forced to read it because I read everything ever written here.
garbage loins are pedaling. probably sounded good when you wrote it. buuuuftt doesn't sound good. sucks. idk not bad piece.
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