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01-06-2015, 05:11 PM
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Robin Williams of Fallen Victims
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Fucking lost my vote.
Arid your verse left me with an appreciation for your focus on structure and how you utilized the line limit this week. It was a creative and interesting verse. Certain I really enjoyed the second stanza - wordinh and rhymes all seemed to pick up as the piece progressed. Vote certain
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