Shut The Door You Idiot...It's Cold Out There

holocene · 01-06-2015, 07:36 AM

hello Mr. J, nice writing here. The word choice was atypical of others in a good way. I think the writing was more seamed together and traditional than many writings here, it was more speaking to people than a dramatized soliloquy. One could imagine this being recited on a street corner, that is the style of delivery. It was a good length, not drawn out but satisfying.

01-06-2015, 07:36 AM	#4
holocene brkn lghts Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 9 Rep Power: 0	hello Mr. J, nice writing here. The word choice was atypical of others in a good way. I think the writing was more seamed together and traditional than many writings here, it was more speaking to people than a dramatized soliloquy. One could imagine this being recited on a street corner, that is the style of delivery. It was a good length, not drawn out but satisfying.