Liquor & Landslides. Don't. Mix.

[holocene]

hello Wise Wiggles. This was great, the best part was how the writing looped back into the central idea without being obscure or stumbling at all. It was narratively unforced. Also, the shortness of the lines made each thought hang in an aesthetically pleasing way, both visually and conceptually. Finally, the emotion behind the writing transferred well.