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01-03-2015, 06:09 PM
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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sucked. but I can see improvement like
dirtied by puberty was so stiff and not good, mainly because you forced an internal fitting of "dirties" just so it could have the rhythmic patterning as the scheme. But you sacrificed wording and overall casting. I suggest if you're going to use a word that you aren't sure of in a incorporating scheme have it be a rhyme scheme that ends the stanza, and make sure the unsure rhyme actually makes complete sense. the only time you should post something you're unsure would work mechanically is if you're sure it doesn't equalize with you emotionally. when you get better YOULL understand this idiyote. ttyl
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