a second thought

Coup · 12-21-2014, 11:14 AM

What happened between us is overrated, a smile with dimples and such,
Turning complicated communication into something as simple as "fuck".
A one night stand every night with the same person; it's lust,
Melodramatic pillow talk only worsen with luck.

killin' it with lines like these...after I felt you drop off a bit in technique and line power, but still with all the simple strong end rhymes you sure did it with skill and care

12-21-2014, 11:14 AM	#2
Coup Don't believe the hype Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 572 Battle Record: 4-5 Rep Power: 0	What happened between us is overrated, a smile with dimples and such, Turning complicated communication into something as simple as "fuck". A one night stand every night with the same person; it's lust, Melodramatic pillow talk only worsen with luck. killin' it with lines like these...after I felt you drop off a bit in technique and line power, but still with all the simple strong end rhymes you sure did it with skill and care