timeless 0-0 vs Sharp Nine 0-0 - SHARP WINS

E Tha Real · 12-19-2014, 01:38 AM

Noel - played concept but this worked for me
Late night - i was diggin it, nice set-up
Time in a bottle - felt long but had a sting

Vs

Kneedown - nice current concept
Ecstatic- had potentiaL

Timeless shake off the rust and as everyone says work on wording so those lines pop. I think you can focus less on flow and carrying over rhymescheme and more on the set-ups. Sharp not much i can say other than i dig your set-ups and feel your verses read smooth.

Vote- sharp

12-19-2014, 01:38 AM	#10
E Tha Real yes really Join Date: Nov 2014 Location: NC Posts: 362 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 6054895	Noel - played concept but this worked for me Late night - i was diggin it, nice set-up Time in a bottle - felt long but had a sting Vs Kneedown - nice current concept Ecstatic- had potentiaL Timeless shake off the rust and as everyone says work on wording so those lines pop. I think you can focus less on flow and carrying over rhymescheme and more on the set-ups. Sharp not much i can say other than i dig your set-ups and feel your verses read smooth. Vote- sharp