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12-11-2014, 02:48 PM
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White Earl
Join Date: Jan 2013
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Couldn't be fly because I never seen pass poor
Cool play on word Didnt dig a whole lot in this. The major problem is you stil have a dissadvantage with your accent. I say that because you write like you speak broken english. Is that a fair assumption? Keep writing. I like reading
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