VENgeance (0-0) vs LyricAli (0-0) (Ali Win By TKO)

[~RustyGunZ~]

with the blood of every emcee i've defeated in a sea so crimson n infinite
i'ma plant the seed of evil n greed n i need your corpse so i could christen it
cool flow to this, no punch at all though.

but, u a burden.. so someone AliRT 'M cuz i'll insert-him lyricAli into a raw plot
this the end of Ali, dude's so frail he couldn't throw one punch so why not...
the end of this oddly worded. could have delivered the punch better.

break keys on a mercenary, this impersonate'n hater think'n opportunity's knock'n
this loser shouldn't be talkin, stay gagged up n stuffed in the closet ya locked in
the punch was weak, no connection to anything to make it unique or dope.

i'm above u, hella like pavelow, adren got soldiers on payroll, one i know has already K.O'd-
you, so ya could take command of time n still not make it march to april, i know.. life's so cruel...
the punch was weak. very basic.

this elitist gon' grieve-this genius's skill cuz it's so deep its intravenous, u called me out think'n "i'll win this most likely"
but adren'll land shots like epinephrine if u wanna test-a-veteran then entice me, cuz i eat emcees but i don't like light meats
pretty basic punch, at least an okay grasp of concepts.


yeah you need some work with dropping heavy hitting bars. you have the structure and flow down pretty well but lack the concepts. read some verses and work on wordplay, nameplays, metas, similies, anything really. these are more OM bars than battle bars.

will edit with other guys feed soon