AOWL Week 8: pohfig (4-1) VS. Red glare (4-2) [RED GLARE WINS, 7-5.]

Xces · 04-11-2013, 04:05 PM

Ok so either when I voted ont his it got deleted or didn't post because I was on a cell phone so here.

Poh - I like how you wrote this piece but I feel like you haven't really drawn your own personal flavor to the style, rather just re-skined Cape Fear and presented it as a rhyme.
The bits where you draw away from where it seemed you were going make the piece lack an overall focus which majorly took away from it for me.

RedGlare - This isn't your best work to date nor the most original I've seen out of you even in the short period I have been on this site. It's interesting how you twisted it to be about superman but it's not all where I thought it was going.

Overall. I think both competitors could have come with a higher quality piece, but I have to give my vote out to the person who was more original.

V/RG

04-11-2013, 04:05 PM	#20
Xces Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 66 Battle Record: 2-0 Rep Power: 38	Ok so either when I voted ont his it got deleted or didn't post because I was on a cell phone so here. Poh - I like how you wrote this piece but I feel like you haven't really drawn your own personal flavor to the style, rather just re-skined Cape Fear and presented it as a rhyme. The bits where you draw away from where it seemed you were going make the piece lack an overall focus which majorly took away from it for me. RedGlare - This isn't your best work to date nor the most original I've seen out of you even in the short period I have been on this site. It's interesting how you twisted it to be about superman but it's not all where I thought it was going. Overall. I think both competitors could have come with a higher quality piece, but I have to give my vote out to the person who was more original. V/RG __________________ "A culture is only as great as its dreams, and its dreams are dreamed by artists." -L. Ron Hubbard