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Composers: Quality, Yung Jay, VENgeance (Adren)
Mixed By: Quality Released: Jan 2009 Length: 3:52 I'm On: Verse 3 http://www.myspace.com/rsolja/music/...g-jay-53913189 you can tell it's an old song besides the release date it's actually a myspace link, xD peep game though. if i get some actual feed by the end of the day i'll start dropping more updated tracks loL. maybe some new ones. Lyrics: when your being raised up in a hood that gives u false hopes dreams is all i got, gotta get it, don't stop, hit the threshold when i was young, neva thought about guns i kept professional now i hustle everyday, yup it's a yes yo gotta protect in what i invest neva the less i'm deal'n wit the stress of being successful whatever happened to cream, dreams of living clean and exiting the ghetto scene up in a limousine guess it's neva meant for me i gotta live a life of tragedy but when i see my baby n it magically disappears in front of my eyes lies dissolve and i try to be nice n show some love n thank the lord above even though a thugs life man is so fucked up i neva say i had enough cuz u gotta keep dreaming, it's the only real feeling your gonna have it's what gives life it's meaning if u only knew the half of the struggle |
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Great beat.
Wasn't really feeling the beginninG "Imma Dreamer" part.. on to verse 3.. dope, you have a variety of spitting that's fresh and comes off professional. only thing it might be cuz of the quality but it makes your voice sound a bit muffled. Lyrics was dope, post em up cuz I missed a few. but all in all pretty dope for an older song. Wow Myspace lol love it
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agree with bent.. quality made it hard to hear.. id like to listen tonit as i read the lyrics.. not bad though, i would listen to some.more if you posted. cheers
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Well I would feed man but I'm on the shittiest web connection...dial up lol. I have wifi from time to time on the weekends if I have it this week end I'll check it out for sure man
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It's pretty sick. "whatever happened to cream, dreams of living clean
and exiting the ghetto scene up in a limousine" was my favorite tho.
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Cleaned. Please stop beefing/ freepostin in threads. It puts your verse at the top/ on the forum index over other people who havent had their pieces up top as long
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this waso k tbh..first guy was horrible second guy was actually decent. and the third guy was coo i guess.
overall though this was ok at best. props for the drop. |
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