WK8: CopyPat (5-2) vs. Arid (0-0) [CopyPat wins, 8-0.]

Certain · 12-02-2014, 01:02 AM

Arid: There was some interesting lyricism here but not enough of a thematic picture. You seemed to be bounding with your rhymes, which does you no favors. This league tends to put content above all else.

CopyPat: This definitely wasn't your finest effort. Gone was the creativity you typically show in your storytelling. But your rhyme schemes were great as always. I like when you go with the shorter line structures. Your approach to the topic was basic and not all-encompassing, but the focus wins you the battle.

Vote: CopyPat

12-02-2014, 01:02 AM	#10
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Arid: There was some interesting lyricism here but not enough of a thematic picture. You seemed to be bounding with your rhymes, which does you no favors. This league tends to put content above all else. CopyPat: This definitely wasn't your finest effort. Gone was the creativity you typically show in your storytelling. But your rhyme schemes were great as always. I like when you go with the shorter line structures. Your approach to the topic was basic and not all-encompassing, but the focus wins you the battle. Vote: CopyPat __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.