The Warlord (unfinished topical)

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Originally Posted by Lars

Good lord was I in asshole mode when I wrote that reply haha!

Lol I thought it was pretty good - I get like that when im hungry too...

As for the drop - @nO gOoD!
These are my accounts of a manical rise of a beast.
A tyrant who hides in the streets, and thrives on lies and deceipt.

Nice bar.... Think Lars was being a bit picky with the comma but he is right, its not needed.

Overall nice peice while its in planning stages...Think about where you go from there though..

I will be back to give full feedback when its completed so let me know!!